Oh, such a beautifully painful story. I rather like how Kairi is developed in this story, even if she was a selfish little princess as a kid, but she grew up to be quite ok. But I really feel pity for poor Namine. *sob*

I read in your profile that you're revising this. I wish you good luck on that, and keep up the excellent work!

Oooh...Very nice! I wonder what happened to Namine! I can't wait to see what happens next! Also, I love the way Namine and Kairi's past was reviled in Kairi's POV. It was just quite refreshing.

Update soon!

POOR NAMINE.!

This is good. :) I had to look for a certain pairing cause just Dem gave me yaoi. It made me laugh. XD But I thought the characters weren't OCC and I'll read the rest later.

aw, what an awsome story!

its so sad and so exciting! i really want to read more (if your still writing)

ill be waiting impatiently! plz update soon!

This story's great! Can't wait for the next chapter!

*munches cookie* thx nice cookie! yum.

i loved the flashbacks wow. and KAIRI'S POV REALLY WORKS FOR THIS! sorry didn't mean to caps all that but too lazy to rewrite it. i feel really sorry for both of them.

Not many people would agree to driving you to a dangerous city two hours away when you’d rudely awaken them at midnight and they hadn’t seen you in ten years (one of the things I love most about Yuffie is the fact that she would).-lol

I’d ignored him then, to busy thinking about Naminé (not her; I was thinking of fire, how it burned my skin, how his touch had felt like fire; get out of my head, Axel!), but now I wish I’d talked to him.-typo- should be 'too busy'

loved the chapter. awesome flashbacks, good amount of tragedy, good pov, nice length tho i'd hardly expect them all to be this long. can't believe u typed all this in a day ur amazing wish i could do that. and yeah i'm sure there's more but... i can't think of it now so this is the best you'll get. marly doing something that begins with r (at least according to what olette thinks) nami's pic not good would def explain why she ran away. can't wait until the next update *fangirl squeal*

aww no, nami ran away! can't wait for thhe next chapter. hehe i know how it feels typing long chapters is hard, congratualtions you didi a good job of it too

~Shazichan

tee hee, axel called kairi a prude. she is a prude though. poor dem axel can read his lips when he's thinking really hard. this is good, i'll be waitnig for more after i read the next two chapters, and no axel, potty mouth doesn't send me away from this story because it shows axels personality.

aww good i thought kairi might be looking for nami and the sad redhead he saw... that's gotta be kairi

yup i knew it cool. don't know their relation i'm guessing sisters or cousins or something.

cute chapter. please update soon!

I looked up pyromania in the dictionary once, just to prove my point. I was given, “The uncontrollable urge to set fire to things,” as the definition, which did in fact prove me right. I can control any and all urges- I just usually opt not to. And if anyone is fucking idiotic enough call me a pyromaniac, I’ll set ‘em on fire- trust me, Dem knows. He spent weeks regrowing his hair after he first called me that. Now he only thinks it, which I’ll let slide.-lol

i like the banter b/w the 2 knew it was gonna be good. she sure deflated him there in the begining. oh i loved their exchange. always interesting.

He blushes at my words. My roommate actually blushes. Yeah, that girl, Kairi, she isn’t the only prude around here… “A-Axel! I’m not that kind of guy! I just wanted to help her out, is all!” I raise an eyebrow, and he huffs. Sometimes, I think he’s gay. “Look, I am sorry that I don’t womanize like you do. When I get girls, it’s for the actual relationship, not the sex. Seriously, when was the last time you had a girl for more than one night?” …At other times, Demyx is just really fucking annoying.-i can imagine him thinking that and it's rather amusing

I’d never seen him so obsessed with a word before. It was… more than a little disturbing. Then, I realized I’d wasted more than enough time listening to my friend molest some poor girl’s name and ran -quietly- into the bathroom. -lol

axel's predicament at the end there might be interesting *snickers*

aww it's cute and everyone seems in character god job w/ that one it can't be easy. can't wait for the axelxkairi in here myself but i like both pairings and the story. it's good already. i'm wondering abt the pic w/ marluxia tho... *shudders*.

oh and i have a poll up would u mind voting in it? thx.

YAY YOU UPDATED! :D

You don't actually know how happy i am LOL, this has made my day (its given me a break from the constant studying ive been doing :)

Demyx has finally met...Kairi? I think? Wow, i didnt think they would meet that quick lol (if that is her). I have no idea what relation they have to eachother. Sister maybe? or cousin? Im really just guessing lol. Though I do think you really captured on how Demyx was affected by Namine, so don't apologize I think you did a really good job on it :)

Anyway I am seriously glued to this fic (:. I love the fact that I have no idea where this is going, making it all the more interesting.

Hope you update soon and you shall hear from me again in the next chap :)

o wow, i actually love this story so far

ive never heard both pairings being used before, which is why the story urged me to click on it and read it Lol :), and now i absolutely love the pairings

especially namine and demyx

i love the personality you gave to demyx, and i could so see him with namine (:

and the story line is sososo good

its different to those usual storys :)

i hope you update soon :)

cant wait for the next chapter

ill make sure to review on the next one as well )

Yep, it is pretty rare. And every contribution is appreaciated, especially yours, since it's so good!

Ha, Axel is very amusing! I loved the conversation between him and Kairi. It was hilarious!

D'Aw~ Demyx just can't seem to keep his mind off of Namine. Perhaps he was playing the music to drown out thoughts of her? Even if they didn't interact more this chapter, I still enjoyed reading this chapter, most definitely.

And, poor Axel. Though, for some strange reason, I'm visualizing him creeping along the wall accompanied by the Mission Impossible theme song. (My brain works in weird ways... Which can be good occaisonally.)

I'm glad that my review motivated you! It means that you were fast enough to get the chapter out a few hours after you replied to me, which is very good. *nodnod*

Update as soon as humanly possible,

avikar