Your writing is perfect for Fuu and Mugen. I loved this.
It was incredible. _

LMAO! Haven't read this in a long while until this morning. Love what you have going on there with those two, the only thing I wished was, it could have been a least a tiny bit more. Both characters are well protaryed so that makes me glade.

Amazing I think you should have many more reviews! Its rare I love stories on FanFic but yours was beatifully written.

Great fic! I really like the use of imagery here.

how lovely..in a way. hahaha. that was the first word that came to mind. this was very well written and i enjoyed every second of it. this is like the third time ive read it. and i had to review and save it as a favorite.

this is a one-shot right? how bitter-sweet.

it would be great if you continued, but i also must comment on how great the ending all fits.

That was well-done. Simple, realistic, and adorable. Two thumbs up. :)

lovely )

Whoa. O.O [In a good way XD]

It kinda made my heart beat faster in a way, probably 'cause I'm not really used to reading...this kind of fic. But it's good, I mean-as in you didn't go overboard with the description, and it flowed well. The ending seemed bittersweet [at least, that's what I get out of it], a touch...I don't know how to say it, hopeful in a way, perhaps? Hm. I'd have to know this fandom better XD.

Anyways, kudos for a brilliant fic~:D

- Beth.

Very well written!

This is such a nice sweet story, even though it kind of bittersweet at the end. It would be great if you would continue it! But if not I know its one that I will read again and again!

wow this was SO GOOD! is this a one shot?

plz say no! but anyway this was very well written and amazing :D

I Hope that you will continue this, in fact, I am looking forward to it. I very much liked this story, keep up the good work.

very pretty. It's been a while since I've read FuuxMugen fics but I'm glad yours is the first I've hit upon.

That was really good _

Lovely. :)