love it please write more

“Hey, how much money do you have?”
“I dunno, like 72 cents.”
“OHP! You know what that means!”
*cries* “I don’t have enough money for cHiCkEn NuGgEtS”

Great story! Loved it

I don't know if you still online, if you are gonna read this, but damn! I need to leave a review! This was so cute! Just need something to read with this thematic and it's perfect! I love this big brother Dean, and even when -we knew- this Jhon it's like a little out of character, it was perfect.
And let me tell you that the detail about dean's smoking it's so interesting. And also was the dyslexic complex...But I don't know, with the cigarretes, for me it was original and I don't know. It's a major factor in the plot?
Really love it! n.n
(also english it is not my first language...sorry if there's any mistakes)

All honesty I can just imagine Can somehow coming into this story as an angel still and heals Sam.

Hi Thanks for sharing your universe.
I like these Winchesters, even though they're not THE Winchesters. Sam and Dean are just... as we love them.

I love this story. thank you for writing it.

That's so wrong how the kids treat Sam at school. I actually have a class with a guy in a wheelchair and nobody treats him differently. I mean, maybe a little, like getting out of his way and not bumping into his chair. It's just wrong to see/hear/read people treating other people differently just because they are different. And how they started laughing at Dean because of his dyslexia, it's just cruel! But the story is great, I'm actually reading this for the second or third time, it's a really interesting series!

I just started reading this and it is really interesting I love it

Hi! So I re-read this as I read it the first time on your AO3 account. It's a wonderful story (as I told you in my messages to you on Tumblr - I'm idjitscas btw) so, yeah, going to read the rest of the series now! :D

The part where Sam thought it was weird that Dean was crying because they just met each other ans Sam realizing he'd do the same... that part made me facepalm although it was filled with feels. It's like you're poking the reader with that paragraph saying "Do you get it yet?"
lol

Nice redo. A question though. Sams dream about Dean dying of lung cancer seems to have been removed. Was this intentional or a mistake in editing the original story?

Cool a rewrite! I have read this series before, but this was new! I love it and I really really hope you continue this verse!

This is a really good story, a great idea really. Just a little too much fluff, if you know what I mean. I really am enjoying it though. :)

Great fic and so glad to have had a chance to discover it!