Reviews for It Happened in the Desert
Cisely chapter 4 . 1/22/2017
Nooo! Why haven't you updated this amazing story! It was so good! Please come back and update I'd love to see what happens next!
Guest chapter 4 . 4/15/2016
You must write more!
VampireKitty34 chapter 4 . 1/15/2016
Awwhh I really can't wait for more! Gaara and Sakura are so cite together

Fuck that one Bitch! I must kill her-!
rainyrhapsody chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
This is quite a creative idea, I'm going to have to admit. I enjoy your view of most of the characters, and the way your writing flows together is excellent.

I'd just like to point out a minor grammatical mistake that has been recurring throughout this chapter. Following a set of quotations, (for example, "What's your name?" or "Gaara.",) the word following it (for example, asked or said,) should be lowercased. So, it should be written, "What's your name?" he asked. Or "Gaara," he said. Just thought I'd point that out.

There are a couple other mistakes throughout this, but I don't think they're too major, so I'll just leave them for now.
eluce chapter 4 . 3/29/2015
Right, that spider-thingy story was the scariest. lol
This kind of 'Gaara' is so cute, and I really love how you made his character. It's so different with any other 'Gaara(s)' out there. Tho it's a bit OOC from the real one. But really this one is so adorable ;)
I know it's been a while but it would be soooo great if u don't give up on this story! ;)
Reluctantly chapter 4 . 9/21/2014
Im so sad that this hasnt been updated... :c oh well. it was good while it lasted
Luna Charmcaster chapter 4 . 6/2/2014
Please update this I love this it's kind of funny but it good
Kathryneguillerm chapter 4 . 5/7/2014
I'm pretty sad that this story hasn't been continued :( I loved it!
Natasha chapter 4 . 2/9/2014
Never disappointed and will diligently be waiting for yoru next chapter. Your Newest Fan. Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh Gaara Woooooooo. I know im silly But love Gaara Will wait for next one Bye.
Natasha chapter 3 . 2/9/2014
lovvvvveeeeedddd it hope you keep the story going for awhile longer cause its great.
Natasha chapter 2 . 2/9/2014
loved the water bath and I think your doing great with Gaara's personality, love it. And I actually had the water thing happen to me in the end I liked it and thought it was funny.
Natasha chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
this is my firs time reading your work but so far its really good I like it and to the nacy drew question yes in a bad way. But this is just my opinion so don't take it to harshly.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/11/2013
Awesome
LuceWolfe chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Hi, I don't want to sound pushy, Just motivational. In many books, there is a competition with guys. In this one, its kind of Sasuke VS Gaara, but not really. If you want to, try and make it more competitive for Gaara. This can make their relationship stronger in the end. Once again, don't want to sound pushy. WHEN IS YOUR NEXT CHAPTER COMING OUT? I need moreeee
Luce
LuceWolfe chapter 4 . 7/12/2013
When is the new chapter? OhhhI love the sasukes part you're a good writer!
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