Hella sad... but dammit it was good

No! I would rather they had died, leaving only Jacob & Renesmee than to do this to Alice & Jasper.

I hated the ending of BD too... But my sequel was far more hopeful. As were others I have read.

You are an excellent writer, but this hurts too much to read further for entertainment.

This is such a sa story can they at least meet up in heaven and make up I want my Jasper and alice back

Oh God... First, I felt like he never really loved her. I mean... He couldn't possibly do all the things he did to her If he really loved her. I think -in this universe- that he just felt good by her side, that's why he was with her. Urghhh, I hated him so much... Til the end, and you confused me. Then what did mean the necklace at the end? I cried a lot, for Alice, she's always so sweet, that I can't believe that someone would ever hurt her, specially the most loved one.

It's such a great fanfic, I loved reading it, for all the emotions. Also... If Jasper didn't exist, I guess that Edward would make an awesome couple with Alice... So I felt kind of... good with that "fight" with Bella. Hehe, it's just great. Blessings 3

Bastard. I just... Jasper's such a little bitch! No. No pity from me. Poor Alice. What the hell Jasper?! Why? Oh, no you bastard.

I think it's a little heartbreaking he kept her necklace. What the hell does that mean, Bastard Jasper? Well, it means you never know what you have until its gone!

I liked the concept, and how the characters changed through their circumstances. I was also very disappointed over Breaking Dawns ending. Like what the hell Meyer? You too lazy to give a satisfying battle cause you're afraid of losing a couple key characters? You're not worthy of being called a writer. ( though she did redeem herself in The Host. Good read)

I think I started hating the series when I saw that was the ending. I didn't really love the series to start with (little bitchy Bella and her perfect little everything really pissed me off) but the ending sealed the deal for me. A very vapid series, I always thought.

But I liked this AU. But i didn't. Do you catch my drift? Like I said, interesting concept but very sad.

Oh. My. Gosh. I LOVED IT! WRITE MORE!

Jasper! How could you? You bastard! GRRRRRRRRRR!

It was a sad chapter.

Poor, poor Alice.

And once again, I say poor Alice.

Jasper... what have you done? Poor Alice.

Brilliant and great start. Poor Alice.

PLEASE put up chapter 8 again. I know you had one. I enjoyed that ending. :( This is such a wonderful story, superb job! I come back to read it every now and then along with You've Kept Me Waiting. Wonderful writing, I must say.

sooooooo...this is complete then?

welp.

i do hope you know im going to go to bed depressed...

but great writing.