klukexjiro 4ever and all so shuxbouquet 4ever

Aw, this was cute! Pity this didn't actually happen in the real thing... or the game. Yeah if something like this happened in the game, that'd be nice. Nice grammer use by the way. ;)

Good. The imagery was decent, the plot was based off the episode, but I think your idea should've happened in the real episode. I'm glad Shu's with Bouquet and finally accepted her love. I wouldn't want him to get too jealous about Jiro and Kluke's relationship. ;) After all, Shu is my third favorite character in the Blue Dragon series.

Ah, that was great! :D I really wanted to see more Jiro x Kluke in that episode (and the anime in general), so it made me really happy to see this. Also, I know this is off subject, but I'm looking forward to reading your other Blue Dragon story; I want to finish the game first before I read it, so that's why I haven't done so. Anyway, keep up the good work. :)