Niiiiiice. Very dark. Fits Crona quite well.

Awwww poor Chrona. *cries* although you did write the feelings really well though, that is what she would be thinking. Good job *continues crying*

Chrona is a boy, for future refrence. He is always refered to as him. And he is my favorite _ Nice job on this! I feel so bad for him :(

Oh... I like it. :)

Chrona would do everything for Medusa, not only because it wants Medusa to love it, but to see that it doesn't get beat again. ):

I do believe PoisonedCandy-chan deserves something of a medal.

And in the event that a medal cannot be produced, I would suggest something cold, in the manner of medalitry, but nonetheless relatively significant.

Like shaking a predisposed Nobel Prize winner's clamming, slightly decomposed palm.

Frank, short sentences ringing slightly of Grimm fairytales comorbid with a damnable cynicality I had once thought reserved quite well to myself and a small community of misanthropes- it's really pretty rare that when I do get off my ass and skim fanfiction that I am struck by prowess over style to the point where it will spawn a considerable amount of envy.

Brava, Candy-chan, brava~3

Aww, I really liked this. I love how you make Chrona's mind work

Aww poor crona. Great job on it thought :D

I really enjoyed this Poor Chrona. His/her ideas of wrong and right are so twisted...