Cute story - it gave me all the feels! Thank you :)

Awwe!:)
That was SOO cuute!:)

That was a really sweet one shot. Thanks got sharing. :-)

Love it

This was a cute story. You did a great job.
Maye

love this story

Just came across this little story of yours. Looooooove it! My only complaint is that you have no more stories for me to enjoy. I love your writing style. Its clear, descriptive and yet to the point. No babbling or bad sentencing. So, I request more more more stories asap!

Jessica

Alsome story i love that bell would have end dated him when he wa a geak

you should continue this story i know a lot of people would want it too.x)

great

I really enjoyed this story. Any Plans on continuing it? I really hope you do, because this was just absolutely brilliant - and I would really love to see more of this Edward and Bella. Great Job!

I liked your story, you should tell us what happene on their second date and should help Emmette get Rosalie, I would like to know why she didnt like Bella.

i love it

good job

I didn't hate it at all. I thought it was adorable and very well written. I think you need to write a second chapter that details whatever date they are on when they finally do end up at the Marriott, though. ;) I loved all the coincidences and the fact that this couple has a past even though they never actually knew each other.

Thanks for sharing your writing. I hope to read more of your work in the future.

I really enjoyed it! Great job!