Be careful about things like content and legalities.

love it plz update

Please please finish this story. It's hella good and I love Nate/Vanessa stories.

Oh my gosh! Cliffhanger...please update soon! _

Really good chapter I must say! I love the friendship relationship between Vanessa and Chuck! I also liked the interaction between Chuck and Dan too! Please write more soon!

Hi I'm from the Writer's Anonymous Forum, I might be a bit late, but saw that you're a Gossip Girl Fic and was interested to give you my own review.

Before I start: I am NOT putting down your work in any ways (I’m sorry but a lot of people—generally kids—can be quite nagging when I’m only there to help).

All right, so first off, I want to say I love this story, though I do think that it’s advisable to cut down the “fuck” and other swear words, using too much might sound like you're pushing it just for the restriction.

Second, I do see an occational lack of commas in some of your quotes, so I suggest you proof read those.

But apart from that, I don't really see what's the matter with it except... well I don't really like Nate and Vanesse together _"'

Good work! Keep it up!

Pay it forward,

Em

Oh! I feel a very interesting next chapter coming on! Love it! :D

Love the way this is going. Fascinating.

I love the Chuck/Dan interactions! Poor V.. I can't wait to read Nate and Blair's reactions. :-)

Oh. Wow. Cliffhanger! I can't wait to see Blair's and Nate's reactions to a disheveled Vanessa, an annoyed Chuck, and an embarrassed Dan! )

Keep it real,

CW

Great chapter.

Liked the Chuck and Dan scenes, thought drunk V was funny.

Liked the interactions between Chuck and V before she passed out and the interactions between Chuck and Dan.

Thought it was good to see this side to Chuck, the side we rarely ever see, it was good for someone who doesn't get along with Chuck to see that side of him too.

Liked how you showed each of the characters thoughts, and conveyed each of their emotions.

Thought the way you ended it was great, definitely a good cliffhanger.

Looking forward to reading more, especially with the arrival of Blair and Nate. Curious to see what's going to happen.

i don't know how many times i've read over that dance in the club, it's so shmexy.

oh, chuck. he knows how crappy nate can be and here he is helping to clean up the mess his bff helped create. what a good friend. :D

and loved the cd interaction too, haha

can't wait to see what's next, ud soon!

I liked the caring chuck, does dan still have feelings for vanessa? what are blair's and nate's reaction to seeing vanessa and chuck together? keep updating please great story!

awsome chapter! You write Chuck so well. Loved both Chuck and Dan taking care of her. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

ouch!

well that's one way to end it leaving me still trying to go down the page for more. Nix you HAVE to update soon or the wait will kill me, that's for sure. can't wait to read more. loved how both the boys worried about her and their little argument. :) update soon, please? :)

manda

YAY!

Really good :) Love the tention between Nate and Vanessa especially with the dancing!