This looks like it came straight out of the show; it would make a good episode kicker, funny and totally in character. Shego sounds perfect, her sarcasm bringing the story together. It's the little descriptions that make this story great though-Ron and Shego facepalming as the hostages are revealed, and Drakken reverting to a little kid as he gets the bear back, then 'Err...none of you saw this.'

I have to say though, I think Shego would torch Pandaroo, Drakken or not.

This story is hilarious! The personalities of the characters are accurate as well. Great work!

Heh, loved it. )

Great story, gave me a good laugh.

keep on writing,

Reader101w

Legendary idea.

Ahah, this was a great one XD It was funny, IC and oddly cute, and since I'm dumb I didn't realize who the hostages were until Drakken and Kim revealed them. I felt like pacepalming with Ron and Shego at that point XD

Oh, and another thing that made me chuckle was the bit about Drakken's "to do" list. Priceless. Don't know if I ever said it already, but your humor is great XD

Very nice story.

I won't join the line of people who said that everyone was in character, they were. What I liked most was the idea that Ron finally got the chance to 'face palm' over something Kim did on a mission.

Still, good story.

daccu65

Muahahaha!

Now that's the kind of silly fluff that makes everyone's day. Classic spy scene setups, dropping a To Do list at the kidnapping, the silly reveal complete with syncronized face-palm... Everything about this was comedy gold.

Shego definitely got up on the wrong side of the tanning bed, though. She usually waits until AFTER Dr. D's plans are shown to be completely futile to pull out the really vicious digs.

And Drakken hugging his teddy with pure boyish joy is the cutest mental image I've had in a long time. “Err…none of you saw this.”

Excellent work, and pure silly wonderment.

Now that was just cute. Everyone in character and the ending was priceless.

Amusing to say the least. Gods now I sound like an aristocratic supervillian. But Drakken and Kim were definitely in character and it sounds like something they'd be bothered with.

~Darev

Oh, the twin panic attacks, they must have been epic. Very nice.

Spectrre

Cute story, with snappy dialogue and everyone in character.

This was funny!

Everyone was in character; so much so that I could see it as part of an episode.

Good job, Neo!

I bet Kim and Ron's closure was MUCH better than Drakken and Shego's...

CB73