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This story was awesome! I especially loved the line: "If I'm going to hell, I'm taking you with me..."

I know this is the second time I picked out a line in a review, but I wanted to say something more specific than just this was an amazing story... Which it was...

The suspense and the writing was on point...and the rest just flowed seamlessly together. Loved it.

When Sonic said "Now who wants some o' my chair!" was hilarious, haha. I'm loving this story...but poor Shadow :'(

:) It's pretty good. All I think you need to do is put a row of stars or hit the enter button a few times when the scene changes(better known as a chapter break) so the reader will know that you have switched between places/characters when you don't make it obvious or write where they are before you continue with the story. As in... you may have some Shadow dialog, but you say where he is after he talks. Try and switch that around. You don't want the reader to think Shadow just hopped into the scene saying something random when he's really on the other side of town talking to someone else.

Ho...ly...shit...

Ruin, you f*cking bastard! I'll stake you in f*cking *****!

...Ahem. Sorry 'bout that. In regards to the chapter, I kind of WOULD hate you for the cliffie, but I'm reading this after it's complete. So! On to the next, and the plot is actually enthralling, I'm just loving this. x3 You need more reviews.

-is reading last paragraph-

No, damnit, Shadow you moron, don't! Don't do it! Fuck...fuckfuckfuckfuckfuckfuckfuck-well, he did it.

Dx That idiot! He's so overreactive! Gah!

Very interesting so far. Y'got me hooked. xD

Very nice story. I really enjoyed reading the nine chapters and decided that I would drop you a review! I think now is the time to try and delve into Shadow, and what exactly he is and how he came about being one. But you're doing a wonderful job and I decided to let cha know! :3

excellant job Flaz S. i'm definately favoriting this.

To be honest this chapter dissappointed me. I was hoping that it would be Shadow who would kill Ruin. I think he would've been better choice than Sonic.

Also very short fight between Sonic and Ruin, I don't understand why everyone were so afraid of Ruin if he was so easy to kill.

Hmm... Yes. Well done for completing a story! Do you always get quite a fantastic feeling when you do? I do, sometimes. Anyway, enough about me.

Now, I need to tell you something about receiving reviews... Actually, I'll tell you through PM.

Once again, congratulations!

Hi i just read the whole thing (so far :D) Its really good :P

Do NOT let lack of reviews get you down. I'm sure there are people reading this story who want you to carry on...

Either way I can't talk.

I don't know why this story isn't getting more reviews "shrugs" I personally think it's quite good and has a lot of potential. Heh, I'd say that Tails is quite smitten, isn't he. You'd have to be in order to almost miss something like the news Shadow gave him.

Don't you dare stop this fic! I love it! Great job, and keep it going!

Please continue. I like this story, and it would be a shame if you stopped it.