really good story. overall, Kuon is pretty selfish in his feelings, but as they're so new and he's got so many issues, i don't think we can expect better from him until he's gotten some reassurance on Kyoko's part. an admittance of deeper feelings for him would allow him so freedom of thought, i think.

well, that's the opinion i'd been formulating for a while now, and your story fits the theory. thanks- again- for the read!

about the note it was very kyoko-like and i also liked the ending. it really made it feel like a warm fuzzy ending BUT in a good way. good job! :)

This is a good story, but too bad, you didn't write for the continuation of this story (I read your profile). Anyway, I enjoy reading this story and thanks for sharing this. :)

Happy writing! XD

I wonder what she was doing there. Apologize to Ren? Bad Ren for scaring Kyoko! XD

I don't see any OOC in this chapter~

It's a good start by the way. I shall read the next chapter~ XD

oh... very nice and sweet.. Ren X Kyoko forever!

hm that's quite something!

wonderful job! i hope you will continue to write in the future :)

I wouldn't say this is out of character at all. In fact I was just thinking how much this was like the series. Good job working with Tsuruga's inner voice. He can be hard to pull off but I think you did a good job. He's just not honest is he?

It's adorable.

Ah, so in-character ~

You know, I really don't like it when it goes all like 'Oh, I love you, honey - I love you too, darling'

That's why I like your story so much and even more!

About the note: It's so like Kyoko xD

Ah shucks, too lazy to log-in. But, that was cute.

Jealous Ren is always 3d.

wonderful! a fave, for sure.

so in-character. so good. i'm enjoying this a lot. thanks for the read!

Nice job. i really liked this story but...I want more. could u consider adding a part sequal? or another chapter. PLEASE XD

THANKS for the great read