Hey man i know you still writting mass effect and Stargate but this one is pretty good too and near the end? I've read this as much as the your other one that's my fave a bunch of times...with fallout 4 i had to specifically try to remember this one so i can reread it.

Love it give us more

somethings i would like to point out is that a warhead of ... i think it was a gigiton plus did not destroy a gate , how would a 40 megaton warhead destroy a gate .

Nice looking story I'll have to get around to the rest when I've got some more time

Love it so far.

Got me hooked the moment I realized your player character acts both like a proper character and a regular gamer nutjob.

Fucking, pant grenades. I love you.

i liked the story and have enjoyed reading it but you really nerfed the lantis crew, I mean jumpers come with shields and a cloak, and the gate has survived nukes before i understand why you made the decisions but its still frustration

realy good

though i think jhons inteligence stat should be a litle higher since they continualy minchen that he could have been mensa

What happened to this fanfic?

Rodney in control of Liberty Prime...

Well, why not?

I'm hoping the muse returns to you soon, this story is far to interesting to let go.

You writing is easy on the mind and eyes and you descriptions are clear. Dialog very rarely comes off as forced or stale.

You have good writing skills and finishing this story is a good way to hone them.

The only point of critique I haves is your ability to never ever have me look at SG:A characters the same again.

Awesome story I hope you pick it back up again sometime.

Geez just have them meet up with Rodney already. The near misses are getting old, but anyway really good story. Now get off your ass and start writing it again.

Well, it's disappointing that this story was abandoned. Especially right in the middle of a sub-arc, with updates repeatedly promised and close to the end, or at least some kind of ending. I suppose there is no chance of continuing it?

All the characters are well done, but this story leans heavily into angst territory. I did enjoy the humorous parts, and some of the darker ones too, but it left me wondering whether it was too dark. Their reactions to the wasteland seem pretty good. I'm sure the creatures would be a lot scarier than the game makes them out to be.

Some things are left unanswered, however. What is the SGC/Atlantis doing during all this? Surely they can't be sitting on their hands doing nothing? Unlike the other crossover on this site, things seem completely unchanged from Fallout canon, implying an actual alternate America with all the trimmings. I'm sure these would be taken care of if the story had continued.

As for the usual lack of research (or lack of application of research), it's not as bad in this story. Maybe you did a better job, maybe it's just not as noticeable, maybe I don't play enough Fallout.

I'm going to screw with my load order now.

this is a great story the olny problen i have with is is the lack of a ending chapter you left off in a cliff hanger and im probly not the olny one who wants a part 3 of 3

This really needs breaks, for flow purposes. It is murderously hard to keep track of what is happening where.