Oh yaaaaas! Whew!
Sensual city!
Bravo!

i like! i like! write more like this! more i tell ya! more!

Very beautiful :) I love how Heero took over and willed Relena to comply. I loved it :)

Whoo smut! And yeah, it does start out a bit non-con.

Strangley enough, the fact taht heero seemed to know what he was doing really bugged me. Odd I know, but if he's spent most of the past years avoiding emotions and all but stalking relena.. when is he going to have had the chance to get all experienced? lol

No idea why that keeps bugging me.. it just does.. weird lol

I don't think I've said this before, but just in case I have, I'll say it again.

For a one shot, this is my favorite Relena and Heero story! This solidifies the reason this pairing is so intense. So much emotion held back for so long... And this particular scene brings it out in the most simple, and yet the most complex way.

It leaves questions.

What's next? What will happen after? Will Heero learn to open himself to others even more? Will Relena ever get used to the shock that Heero showed her that side of him? Where will this go from here?

I can forgive the slight spelling errors I spotted, because this story knocks the nearest competition out of the park. Well done, friend.

YAY FOR SMUT!

:3

I really liked this story it makes Heero seem more human. It has the feeling of Relena and the secret desires of Heero. If your planning on continueing this story I truly encourage and look forward to it _ Personally I'm a fan of this couple and the way you represented them especially the inside battle in the begining.

YAYZ. Someone finally considers both their personalities. I like how you wrote this.

Fabulous! I really like how you played Heero and Relena .. well done .. I also liked the smut. Very smut worthy in my opinion!;D

I thought this was wonderful...definitely not mindless smut..I thought this was beautiful and very tasteful...and very sweet...

ohmygod!

*drool*

i LOVED it!

write more? :D

WHAT A GREAT STORY! I think you should continue it. It is so well written! The characters are perfect. I'd love to read Heero struggle with this some more.

I really like your story. lol it sounds like something Heero would do. Action with little words. thanks for sharing

Lol this was nowhere near boring and nowhere near mindless smut lol. This was great. I haven't seen a genuine 1xR sex story ( where one or both of them realize their true feelings), in a while.

Nice one! A rare opportunity to read a nice story such as this one. Although , I prefer longer stories. Anyway, I hope you keep writing H/R stories. I really like them! _