I figured the Blade Runner quasi-crossover would be a wee difficult but damn you're pulling it off pretty decently. I can see how dialogue is your strong point much like mine so that's what makes this story very readable for me. Oh...and nice moment with Hinata.

Interesting Story!

Hey there - found your profile on NF, so came over here to take a look, and I'm quite impressed so far - I love these cyberpunk AU Naruto fics, and though yours has barely even begun, the characterisation and premise are both sound, (though shouldn't it be "bunshin" rather than "bushin"?), and I'm interested to see how things play out.

Your story is an interesting take on the world of Naruto. I am looking forward to the upcoming plot developments and character interactions. Are Naruto and Hinata the central characters or will the story focus on a large cast?

What can I say? I seen no mistakes, so all I can say is... good job.

I enjoyed it. Right now they aren't OOC enough to bother me.

I'll set my sensors to look up for next update.

LOL it's blade runner

My circuits are burning. My memory databank desire more of this material. (You are supposed to read it as "WOW, nice one. Write some more.")