Now that is an ending worthy of our favorite couple. Thank you so much for expanding the story, I enjoyed reading this. I loved the characters development in the story as well. Wonderful read!

Bella is benefiting from edward blackmailing billy now

Seriously?

I think she is pushing him...he is a professional and she is dojng this at his place of work

Man I really wish she was a stronger female...she just acts so stupid

Eh...i wishshe hadnt come off looking like an idiot

I am so glad I found your story. What a fun journey! I was super surprised at ending one... but surprisingly loved it. However, I loved that you continued it and they both got to grow and in the end, end up back together. Perfect. Thanks for the wonderful adventure. :)

Yes, Edward behaved so wrongly, yet Bella is the saint. Jheez you make it out to be all on Edward

Didn't like this chapter. It was weird. That's his sister.

It was great writing! I just feel like that was really immature on Bella and Alice's part. I feel like that would be extremely embarrassing to do that when you've been invited to the opening of a new establishment by someone that had a hand in it. Especially when you're around your date's business associates and such. I'm loving the story though! Can't wait to keep reading

Wonderful story. Smartly done with the twists and turns. I liked your Bella - she actually had a backbone (amazing!), and I appreciated Edward's growth and eventual redemption. Thanks for writing :)

please tell me that edward and bella will be together in the end if not i will stop reading this story now because i don't like stories where they don't end up together

two forks are really unnessessary

Yay! I'm done. Thank you for writing this. I love it. :) please keep writing more :)

You have a nice touch with dialogue and describing places, I can still "see" Alice's basement office at Platinum. Thanks for sharing your writing.