I really should not read rape fanfics. Its too painful...

anyways:

I Like your style and the basic idea.

I think in most of those fanfics the victim recovers way to fast. They tell each other how much they love each other and then make love without a problem or a flashback. Thats's not how a trauma is healed. It takes much more time and effort.

You left that part up to the readers. We don't know how long this will affect chichiri and tasuki. I like that. You showed some of the consequences.

Good work.

But:

Why does it always have to be Nakago?

Plus i think it's kind of weird having tasuki think "beautiful scar". Sounds creepy to me...

Beautiful.

I really don't know how you managed to express this without making it cliche, but you did and this is an extremly good fic. I really admire how you managed to make the conflict resolved in the right time and place. Keep up the good work.

I love you! Good idea and poor Chichiri!

But "great minds think alike" no da.

I have a similar story... well not really but the bondage and abuse of my favorite character are there.

I'm glad I'm not the only person to hurt their favorite characters. ( I like Kurama _)

If I ever write my story, would you be interested? OK

-Aeliak

This one brought tears to my eyes near the end This was... really fucking beautiful.

Wow...that's a definite wow...poor Chichiri!

Aeri: wow...this is one of the most saddest story/fanfiction i have ever read...soo much emotion running through, and the angst! Great Job! The plot was really great, if there was any. Nakago isn't all bad really, but he let things influenced him to be an evil bastard...but you know...that's how the world is...
Once you have something that you thought you could have forever...it'll just fly away before you realize how much you treasured it...
Anyway! I love this Again, great job on it!

Beautiful fic, loved your writing.

I LOVED it. Just..there's not even need for more words.

my gawd. ;-; this was so pretty no da *glomps* make more to this! ;-;
*huggles my tasuki and chichiri plushies*

Wow...That was so amazing I can barely say anything! You deserve an award for this or something because I came close to crying. Wow...just...wow...Chichiri is my favorite character, and I've never been a big fan of the Chichiri/Tasuki pairing, but this story was just so amazingly sweet, and honest. It makes me hate Nakago even more...; But anyway, I like how it ended, but I was kinda sad when It ended cause I wanted it to go on, but the ending was so sweet! A truely beautiful story! You get a standing ovation, and I'm putting this story on my favorites list!

One good? Um... GREAT! I cried. I cried a little. Chichiri is my favorite Suzaku warrior. Tas/Chi is my fav pairing. That was great.

*sob sob sobbity sob* S-s-s-o beautiful!

*sniff* Tasuki-san is so GALLANT!

Wonderful job! I want a sequel too!

aw, how kawaii! _ that was a wonderful story! go tasukixchichiri! _

~*Kumori

hmm.. I came upon this fic awhile back and loved it. I just found it again *adds to favs* so I just wanted to say I loved it and you have some great work.