Reviews for Defensive Driving?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/28
I love your tmnt work. I can honestly see Leo and Raph arguing like this. I mean legit! Great job.
SuomiTytt chapter 1 . 2/16/2015
Oh God, I loved that.

Nothing else to say.
Guptanation chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
Damn, fantastic story :) This is probably the best argument sequences between Raph and Leo that I've read. You've done a great job of balancing the anger and emotion with a sense of control and purpose throughout the dialogue. Liked the touch of humor throughout as well.
Sergeant Turtle chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
*snrk*... AHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA!

I can SO see this happening! Great job!

- ST
Karlina101 chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
ha lol
candyfountain chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
I'm really jealous of you ability to do dialogue. Really entertaining fic.
Raphie114 chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
"It woulda made a helluva lot more difference to us if you'd come home instead of spendin' all that time bein' heroic! We remembered you, and we'regonna remember those two years pretty fucking clearly because you make a difference here! You were supposed to behere!"

GOSH!

You.. you.. you'retoobrilliantawesomeamazing and yeah, too freakin AWESOME!

Ok gotta go cry my eyes out that was so emotional ;_;
Kutiel1993 chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Effing LOVE this story, I never get tired of reading it X3
Qk chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Surprisingly well done. I liked it. Nice work.
DanceToTheCadence chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
“…touché.”

“Damn straight.”

LMAO!

Haha you made my day, Thank you for your hilariousness.

Definitely one of the best stories I have had the chance to read.

:D
Robina chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
Ome of the bestRaph/Leo fights EVER! You have an amazing gift for dialouge only stuuf that I totally love! So many good lines, such a great way to show Leo's hypocrisy, and just...perfect. I am now jealous.
Gwen Gamgee chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
Amazing dialog. You can tell exactly what's happening, what their facial expressions are, everything, without a word of description. Tis brilliant.
Suit of Storms chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
“Asshole.”

“Which is just your way of admitting I’m right.”

That's awesome, I cant even count how many times I've used that line on my older brother :)

I LOVED this, and I'd paste more of my favorite lines, but I only have have 9764 charcters left and that's not nearly enough. Write more of these, will ya? You're really good at them.
She-Elf4 chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
Wow. It's sweet, in a pissy sort of way. It reminds me of a Picasso painting; it has a definite central figure, done in a really random way.
Simone Robinson chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
awesome. is this finished or it there more?
24 | Page 1 2 Next »