Great story :)

I love this.

You described the whole scene breathtakingly and believeable !

Lovely piece!

How hauntingly erotic.

You perfectly portray Minato's reluctance to see Kakashi as a man, and ugh. Excuse my gushing.

The wax poetics you use are absolutely breathtaking, not to mention beautifully woven into the text. To my surprise, the ending was flawlessly executed without being cheesy or overly cliché, something I’ve seen quite frequently when concerning these two.

This has to be, by far, one of the best fics I have ever had the chance to read.

~Koi

Very enjoyable for as short as it was. I think you ended it at the perfect place, because this little glimpse into the mind of Kakashi's teacher was perfect.

short and perfect!

Sensual is definitely a good word to describe this scene. It was richly written.