This was very well written; I feel as though I've just been in Edmund's head, which is always a good thing. The progression is well done, and perhaps my favorite thing is this line:

"But what else are we going to talk about?"

It's so true, and so very difficult. It often seems that, when something terrible has happened between people, they spend so much time trying not to talk about it when that's really all there is to say. Beautiful job.

This was nothing short of beautiful, and it's perfect for Easter! I enjoyed this a great deal, and I hope to see more from you soon!

What a great story! I've sat here for a long time, trying to pen this great, eloquent review, but words fall short so I'll have to leave you with three words: I loved it.

God bless,

the shadow proves the sunshine

Oh. This is so very good. I'm glad Edmund could finally say what he needed to say, for his own sake as well as that of other's.

Brava!

Very touching, I love the idea, and certainly well-written.

edmund is such a strong person, but he is also kind and just. aslan taught him to say those three words, the three words he probably hadn't spoken in a long time. even though he couldn't always say it, i am sure his siblings knew it by the look on his face. great fanfic. )

Very well done, I have neverthought o bus rides as being inspiring :)

This brought stinging tears to my eyes. A very sweet story.

Rolletti

I like it!