17. Chapter 17 Nedle wen t b lacking out weith m y pac k were All kidnapped then DRAINED OF Blod tore fire was scroching in both sidde HHair shaven then tore a skin then too late was a Trihybrid you escaped from us halflings Murdered then too late died from blod loss with most as all of c hain ed then Broke thrre had b rain in uriesd was Infected with as all dyijg from then DESTROYED! bitten b ut the Venom was intoour system s then IMPALED! Broken they deporterd us/Aliens/Vulcans was too late to stop it was changed the Cullen s found us/them were sic k deathly ill with a termin al diisease then aFred of b odies wityh both followed with thre Sliced freely then burn t as all of it was already too late was triboth a Turned Shifter/Vampire slaying sailor soldier bitten Alice then POPPED Freelylost theab lity to rest/eat ten with themHad Borg Drone White skin with Falkor's RAed eyes so they bitten was Pierced freely molted like a Insect so they Bodies here it's done found them took them to America but they died on arrival too late foun d guilty of a crime chain ed an d held my trial screaming this Turned one must die Tore with them into pieces murdered then Execution of Isabella Marie Sweannever existed was not human then So they Kiledwith them then Doomerd to b e Immortal forever undead then Slien cded forev erer thern too lateb rought them weee btring ye news dead they are With venomized from carnivorous Vulcan snakes had dioed into the home destroyed tore her with them apart good tried to help her with themblown are punished they never be human sbut nulled freeely with remainig blood scorched thermblew apart areslicerd goodb ring therm now too late the damage was done became a Hybrid with them had Been altered myself was paler b ut still shift too late had a ravenous thirst was Anim al brains needed to eat them like a Zombie thenhadgone on a diet of brains was really hungry of raw blood came Alice she's what hungry then ugh Bellsyour hand it's cold as Andorian ice gasp then they too ate brains to rebuild then from dead animals murdered them was still hungriert needed to hunt and drink and eat brains of animals b ut were as asl of then suddenly converison then Poisoned PIERCED Freely Severed freely then now as far too much the very lastest of blood bitten then Murdered exploded thern weith five to n in e no lon ger heresleweby my toxic weaste animal blood repilicaterd then was paler very pale then so they was with ven om Alice she did killed an imasls buther eyes are Golden /Black she's deadnot dead Great oimmortal imprinted on him this One! gasp you can't dieno so they n ow SLICED From the neck dowpopped first death brought both suddenly n ever changed then woke up undead but n ever died an ymore but suddenly my skin did look different Urgh m y head going to blow Shieldiing most powerful had train ed for millennia Alice mental shield watch my ears pointed with upswept eyebrows your mind to my mind your thoughts to my thoughts that healed Rose was telepathic by touch my hair still the same with bangs was in fact Vulcan with Gaean Forest green blood burning hold it Garrett squeezed my own fingers harder then Preformed the very world famous Vulcan nerve pinch coldly Ow good god woman she's a telepathic being by touch what you embrace Kolinahr gasp she is not aging age Sixty-five Paul spat out his beer What?! we never die yikes now as all of mazillions weer into America she's Extraterrestrial like you crap she's a humanoid Momma mia who is she Madam who dare to speak to me Captain she's cursed to walk on her home world is nomadic now lost from here.

Eh, what's up with the while chapter in bold?

Eh, I need to see how Bella feel, more DETAILS on that because I don't feel it was enough. I just feel like she was pretending to hate the vampires and she suddenly have a dream about Edward Cullen? That's going too fast and the conversation between Jessica and Bella, I was hoping for more originality because it's all basically the same thing in many fanfics, that I quite frankly get sick of that. Also, you don't necessarily need to write "One and Two Chapters" in same chapter, just leave it as first chapter. Show more of the creativity!

This awesome story keeps getting better and better can you send out a notification on w
ho adopts the story

why is the story written in bold, or underlined! its so stupid.

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Will you tell us who has it

aww... but i might take you up on that adoption thing. any way, your story is awesome. why are you giving it up?

–Me!

plz make edward's pov

I would Pm you about this story, dear, but you currently have it disabled. Once, I wrote stories and published them here. That didn't last long, however, as my job moved me around constantly. Now, things are much more settled and I'm back, albeit under different circumstances. I freely admit that I most likely would have put off joining again til much later, if not for your story. It demanded that I stop putting off the inevitable and at least find out if you would let me continue where you left off. Though I shy away from laying out in the open to others where this story demands I take it, I will do so if necessary. Please let me know any questions or thoughts you have for me.

Oh, Emily. :( I'm sorry to hear that your stories are up for adoption, but I understand. I haven't updated in well over a year. It just happens. I hope all is well with you :)

I hope someone decides to adopt this story. I really like it. It's really good.

Soooo, what happens when they go out? I can't wait for more of this story. It's really good. Hope to hear more soon1

I think since its been over a year your amazing reviewers and the people who read your story deserve an update

pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease !

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