| Reviews for One Despicable Guy |
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   woofyy chapter 4 . 1/6/2017 I felt the need to write a comment before I finish the rest of the story. It's an interesting story though there are some things you can improve on. There is room for improvement regarding your sentence structure and grammar. For example, your frequent use of ellipses in your conversational sentences is not very necessary. You also tend to use the same adverbs and adjectives often, like 'beautiful/beautifully' - you can extend your vocabulary with a thesaurus to make your descriptions more colourful. The characters are also a bit OOC as well. Anyways, keep up the good effort and I hope you improve with your writing! Good luck! |
| mickyyoung chapter 20 . 9/20/2016 This is brilliant! I have lots of emotion reading it! The ending... It's heart warming. I've been reading this for two days now! And now it ended *sigh*. I still haven't read the other chapters 21 and 22.. Maybe not until I get over with 20th. I dont waaant it to end! You write this beautifully. |
| Guest chapter 22 . 5/31/2016 Yes yes yes! I finally finished an amazing story! It's actually suddenly making me sad realizing that! Either way thank you for making such an amazing SA fanfic! SA is like one of my favorite animes ever, and reading your fic just made me so happy! I love your writing style and totally encourage another OVA with the kids! |
| shzlyn chapter 20 . 4/24/2016 Thank you for writing, it was fun. Both the plot and characters development. It was perfect. So thank you again :) |
| Guest chapter 22 . 1/21/2016 Hey you are meany towards the Tsuji's its unfair. |
| koko chapter 19 . 1/21/2016 Ugh you forgot Chibi Tadashi in this chapter so sad :( |
| koko chapter 16 . 1/21/2016 Sweet and funny Tadashi |
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/21/2016 I love chibi Tadashi |
| koko chapter 7 . 1/20/2016 Lovely chapter |
| koko chapter 4 . 1/20/2016 Thank god it ended or I was going suffered more in triangle. |
| koko chapter 3 . 1/20/2016 Ugh you are making it impossible for me to ship megumi with Yahiro if continued with making Ryuu that loving |
| Guest chapter 22 . 1/11/2016 More OVA's please |
| Guest chapter 22 . 1/11/2016 A fast forward to the guture please or can you make a long vontinuation story please |
| DatOtaku chapter 20 . 6/9/2015 wow 0_o |
| OpinionPriya chapter 22 . 5/17/2015 Wow! I finally managed to finish this. Wish you could show more of Kyo-Naoki moments. I love them as there a mix of Hikari-Kei and Meguhiro. I love the way Kyo is so forward and outspoken and Naoki being like Yahiro, its so cute. Please write more! |
