I really enjoyed this piece! However I don’t think the Monat marriage is right for it. However I do love the idea of Naruto and Temari with Hinata on the side. Hope you pick this one back up!

ok yeah fuck this I'm out, I wanted a fun story, but it's a story gone in 30 minutes with an annoying ending (atleast for me.) Since you won't read this I will not give any critisism, only flame.
Yeah fuck this story, gone so fast and the last part with Minato, a man pushing 40 marrying a 15 year old? Fuck that, I would rather watch Pedo fest with Naruto becoming all mighty Rinnegan-wielding mastered KCM2 and SO6P mode with 5 other bodies able to use every path of pain, including a brand new DLC of every FUCKING jutsu ever created. Level 10 Fuuin master. Jinchuuriki to Shukaku, Matatabi, Isobu, Son Goku, Kokou, Saiken, Chomei, Gyuuki, Kurama and Juubi. All of those including every power they have. Has enough chakra to blow up the real world, loses to a 13 year old Sasuke with Curse-mark 1320 by Taijutsu and getting surrounded by every hot female in the series. I am pretty dissapointed by this ending/revelation. Will never read any more of your fics am scared. Next you will have Kurama 100000000000 giving Naruto all of his chakra WILLINGLY at part 1.

WHAAAAAT!

Oh damn...I can't wait to read more!

Yo! You need to continue this series! It is amazing!

Really satisfying Read, but i feel like either the Uchiha dont attempt a Coup d Etat since u have Minato(just as Danzo seems to hold himself back in this story) but even if why should Shisui die? Shisui died since Dnazo took his Eye and Itachi never had a Problem with Communication with the Sandaime so why with the Yondaime?
Besides that excellent really!

oh thank the log naruhina is still happening. but man for minato to do that was very unexpected. look forward to the next chapter

if this marriage contract happens I'm out. but there is still time so I will continue reading. how could you do this to hinata?!

holy shit i didnt see that coming

Oh please don't end it there! I really want to see how this turns out! It seems Minato is unwilling to shove another burden on Naruto, which does seem like something he'd do.

And Naruto made Hinata angry! Kiba and Akimeru got caught in the crossfire!

Since Naruto isn't allowed to tell anyone, I think Hinata will absolutely DESTROY Tamari in their match! Provided Gaara doesn't go crazy and destroy the village.

Again, please continue this. It's an excellent story, and getting even better!

Love your works!

Very fun twist reveal there!

I think this would have been better as a one-shot, especially considering your publication pace, but it was a fun place to leave this.

I imagine you are probably on to other things and likely won't come back to this later. Unless you get some inspiration for the future of the story and feel the itch to get back into it.

Like say, Sasuke ostensibly turning traitor to join up as Orochimaru's partner in the Akatsuki, but actually serving as Konoha's spy, with Itachi as the spymaster. The ultimate moment of the revelation would be just as Sasuke would get revenge on Minato by having Kurama extracted, but instead turning on Orochimaru (and Pain) in a final(?) act of dedication. Washing away the stain of "traitor" from the Uchiha line.

Or maybe Naruto struggling to come out from under his father's shadow, his father's love (roll credits) for Temari along with being an adolescent making him rebel. He has a sort of "Thor" moment where he provokes Iwa. Minato strips Naruto of special jonin rank, and in retaliation Naruto leaves, becoming a missing nin (but with a capture alive ONLY order, which Naruto is unaware of).

Maybe some inspiration like that will come to you and make you want to take this up again.

I love the story, I hope you continue, best regards, bye!

Please continue it soon

Heh. The truth comes out… please revive! Edo Tensi no Fanfic! This is an awesome comedy!