Reviews for Home
ahsankhanahsankhan2014 chapter 1 . 5/25/2015
really beautiful and romantic
Hope chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
I really love your stories
Dark Roswellian Angel chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
Absolutely beautiful. I love how they're overcoming everything, knowing they can do anything as long as they have each other by their sides. Loved his new definition of "home." You paint a wonderful picture of true happiness :)
loyalfan chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Fluffy fluffiness. Love it.
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
AHH! This makes me feel SO HAPPY! Wow! The warm flow of joy that went through me was constant! *U*

The thought of Kyle an Jessi being so happy was a beautifully painted picture. Actually, to see all of the Tragers so elated was really something I needed after the series ended (IDIOTS FOR ENDING SUCH A HEARTFELT SERIES XC)!

Every part of this was an absolute masterpiece! From Kyle's reflection on what Nicole said about him changing (and apparently killing Cassidy) to confessing how much he loved Jessi and from Kyle reminiscing on all of the bad people in his life and how much he loves Jessi to the fact that everyone was in a present utopia was incredibly awe worthy!

Rock on, and please continue adding your grace to the Kyle XY fanfiction community! U *U*

Ever-so sincerely signed,

Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)

P.S.- Oh yeah. Just a tip: whenever the speaker changes, a new paragraph begins. I noticed you didn't quite manage continuity with that. ;D
A True Dreamer chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
I'm glad I finally got around to reading this! I've been meaning to for a while now.

I like your take on Kyle's response to Cassidy.

I laughed when you said Kyle noticed Amanda was shorter! That was cute.

The only thing I would say is that using "&" instead of "and" was kind of frustrating to read. But I was able to tune it out midway through.
PsychoticLovely chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
oh my gosh, "lovestruck test-tube tragers" very catchy...well i loved your story and hope you continue and make it a good kessi fic, because that would be amazing D keep up the fantastic writing
Lord Admiral Ky chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
Excellent story. Two thumbs up. This story is just so full of Kyle and Jessi love. I love it, I think they are meant to be together. Keep up the great writing skills.
VenusRising chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
wow, so good. i love this ending. everything is filled with so much love. i'm so glad cassidy is gone and kyle and jessi are together. it was so cute when kyle stumbled when he thought of jessi trager. great job!
chocolachan chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
Wonderful ! Huge thank you for this story