This is one of the best young Integra stories I have read! Well done and thank you for posting something so amazing!

*Claps in Applause* I will take the awesomeness i just read and Learn I see what you mean and I loved it This had the BEST Integra and Alucard I have ever read LUV IT to Death BRAVO XD

Wow, great story! Nice to see some Alucard and Integra fics here and there. I also like the strong will you give Integra after the incident in the dungeons. It sounds so much like I expect her character at this age. You even added in comments you would expect a twelve year old to say to not deviate so much away from the fact that yes she is the strong Integra Hellsing but also still in her preteen age. I do like this, I'd love to see another kind of like this.

You definitely had potential, but I had a REALLY hard time getting into the fic at all because Integra was described in such a Mary Sue way. It also read kind of strangely; I'm not sure how to describe it, but it was just hard to read and figure out what was going on. Sorry I can't be more helpful. Keep writing though, anyone with a 90% or higher level of grammar and spelling competency should be encouraged to keep writing for sure! )

that was entertaining!

can you write another one shot between youngintegra and Alucard?

i really like your way of writing

Great. I like this one a lot. Maybe you should write a one-shot in Integras POV of becoming a Knight, and really meeting Her Highness for the first time, or up close and personal as so.