Will this ever get finished? need to read more!

Poor Kate... Mike is my hero and Jim is... well, not a nice guy. Please go ahead. I would like to know if Mike and Jim started to fight... ;)

A great story could we have more

Thanks for the update. Interesting how Jim is being abusive. I am looking forward to how you move forward with this.

I’m hooked can’t wait to see how this is resolved.

Moosagi, you are a great writer. One of 2 whose stories I read. It is great to have you back. I hope all goes well for you and you will continue to write and finish your stories.

Just read in one go and this is good. Update soon

Great chapter and story so far, i hope you up date before next year. If you need ideas, PK me

I'm so glad that you're continuing this story, and I can really see the growth in your confidence as a writer over the progression of the chapters. The subject that you have chosen to deal with is a tough one, but you have dealt with it so well. I love that you're dealing with the emotional damage as well as the physical, and the way that you're writing it shows it's not just some easy fix. On a personal note, I'm glad you're in a better place now and away from that negative relationship. Congratulations on your strength. And thanks for sharing

I so hope that you finish this story, got me hooked!

it's so nice to see you're back, sorry to hear this story was written out of experience, this is a great chapter and hopefully Kate can get out of this abusing relationship and she will be save, fingers crossed. Don't let us wait to long for the next update and looking forward to some more of your other unfinished Sea Patrol stories

How annoying that the author abandoned this story and didn't bother to finish it.

great where is the rest of the story please

Ummmmm why you stopped this!.

nice story, i like it cant wait for the next chapter ;)