Spell check! Sounds interesting I would love to read this after it has been beta checked.

Your stories sucks ass! Go get a beta reader, you pathetic excuse for an author!

You have a very odd imagination but its in a funny way

This chapter is really funny XD

I'm really enjoying this XD

Ha that was kind of funny and the bashing is so funny XD

I'm starting to like this awesome XD

I can't wait for chapter 5 can you have Narx kill or at least severely injured which ends his shinobi career so in that way Helios will go back to being squad 7's sensei.

Darn it the votes have already been finalized, have Narx turn Sasuke into a heartless, he can be the Orginazation's janitor/errand boy as well as Nobody punching bag and target practice dummy.

Nice job on chapter 4 can't wait for chapter 5, I think you should give Naruto Roxas's, Axel's, Xigbar and Demyx's powers, should have Vanitas's and Ventus's Keyblades instead of Oathkeeper and Oblivian.

I agree w/ ANBUpanda. ur idea is cool, but u need 2 step it up a bit. try reading others fanfiction lyk Kyuubi16s or myn 2 get a betta idea

I'll give you an Imaginary Cookie if you continue the the fanfic (I can only give you imaginary cookies since I can't give you real cookies over the internet.

So is this Chapter 4?

Yo! Hey man I like the story and if you 'deam me worthy' I would gladlly adopt this fic! It might take me awhile to get started on it but I will continue it. And you can tell me what your intensions were to do with it, and I might do that or something else.

please get back to me soon

Cerino the Ultimate Ninja

I like the idea, but... this story is just too horrible.