Yeah, why DIDN'T Barragan ever attack Soul Society during his time as King? I mean, he had the power to do it... ...Right?

I don't get it.

What just happened? How did Ulquorria get trick Orihime into healing her, and what's up with these seemingly random flashbacks to people we don't know?

Thank you for this wonderful fic. It closed many more plot holes than the original manga could and gave many of these characters so much more depth. Well-written and clever. It was a truly enjoyable read.

I can't take it anymore this garbage is on of the worst things my eyes have had the displeasure of looking at in quite some time. Please go dispatch of your self and take this piece of crap with you.

Just amazing story!

...darn fanfictions inability to let us reply more than once per chapter.

Anyways, YIKES is soul society corrupt to the core here.

Did...did you just manage to make gin a million times creepier than in basically any other story I've ever read? Because I think you made him a million times creepier than in any other story I've read.

This is the story I vaguely wanted to read after learning how shitty things were in soul society at large. I know what I'll be reading over the next few days!

That said...Aizen what game are you REALLY playing, I hope you're not going to go through with your canon plan because even in a non-shonen universe making Ichigo your enemy is just asking for a baaaaad time...

This is creepily interesting! Though i don't understand why Aizen pecked Rukia on the cheek . Further intimidation? Poor Rukia looks so frighten...

how even is quality of soul defined here?

funny misunderstanding conversation

I'd forgotten about this damn fic. It's a fucking good one. I'd read it years ago and never bothered with the sequel for some reason. Probably because I forgot. Either way, that ain't a testimony on the memorability of your writing.

This has been, in my shitty memory, one of the best Bleach fics I've ever read.

Good job.

I'm gonna go read the sequel now. I'm glad you're still updating it.

This is so inaccurate that I was left wondering “What’s this a fic of again?”
Needs major polishing in the form of fact checking and not making random things up as you go.
Good grammar though.

Marvelous and utmost splendid piece of writing! I actually teared up when Yumichika died...X(
You wrote beautifully and aptly descriptions allowed my mind to paint the actual visual as I savoured every words written down. Chapter by chapter. I felt so gracious to come across this piece of writing. Fanfic be damn. You could have written a book with this. Very engaging and very much enthralled in your gift of the gab. Each characters..even when in non- linear scenarios to either the manga or anime version...were very much acceptable in an AU-esque way.
Thank you for writing. I love Rukia's character development and the sneak peek into the lives of the men in her lives aside from Ichigo. Though allow me to wish upon various bodily harm on Byakuya for his one unforgivable indiscretion towards the Kuchiki princess. He never did apologize to Rukia...,overall I love this story. Thank you once again.

Honestly, I really liked this story, and wish I could read more of it... but it’s way to dense. Yes, descriptors are a great thing in writing, but the author simply has way to many. It gets in the way of this being a great story because the idea seems so original, and quality writing is very hard to find in this fandom. Regardless, I cannot continue to read through all the needless adjectives to get the main story line. In essence they are too distracting.

I do wish the author the best though, because besides this one glaring flaw, everything else is really great.