LMAO, this is sooooooo hilarious! I cackled non-stop

Outstanding. Comedic timing is superb and your interpretation of the characters is spot on. Great descriptions and extremely good job at keeping with the gintama world building

Fu*cking funny as hell. I can totally imagine Sougo doing this.

This is such a lovely story! I really love your One-Shot. The characters are really true to their personalities and your way of writing is so believable it’s almost as though I am reading the manga itself and it is an actual Episode. I know it is a one shot but I hope the story continues. Especially to why Shougo is acting the way he is. It would be a nice follow up to this wonderful story.

I loved your one-shot! The characters feel real and I can totally imagine them doing what you described. And your writing is very good too. Great work!

Excellent story thanks for writing

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH LOLOLOL GO SOOOUGOOOOOO

I was hoping tha there will be a continuation where Okita finally confesses about the reasons for his meddling (because he loves her and dont want her daring anyone) and dates Kagura lol I hope you do continue writing something like that but it's not a big deal if you dont either. I hope you'll write more stories about these two. This is a good short story. Good luckies with your future stories :).

OMG THIS IS SO HILARIOUS XD
I can totally see this in canon, this is just like Sougo will do xD

This should so be made into an episode!

hahahaha sougo was jealuos!
cuteeeee

hahahaha so funny hahaha so lovely
it is so gintama, so okikagu!
haha sougo is jealous! hahaah
oh man! you are the best!
thank you!

Lmao. This needs to be canon. xD

ahhh this needs to be longer !

PERFECT! I can see this really happening!