Are you still updating this story? I would love an end. We don't know if the doctor can help or if he dies! Great story hope the end matches.

I'm so loving this story! I've read about little Iantos and little Jacks, but this is the first and only little John! It's brilliant, especially this latest bit concerning his memory and his brain. Excellent twist!

Now for the bad news - I'm so very disappointed that you've abandoned such a promising and intriguing story! There is so much more to tell, especially since it could go either way - John recovers or Jack & Ianto have to raise him - begs the question, if they Retcon him and raise him, will he turn out like a normal child or is he pre-disposed to become a psychotic killer?

What, there's no more! Great story. Love the twists and turns. Ianto and Jack would make great parents and are showing what great friends they can be with the care they are giving a man who probably wouldn't return the favor. I hope they figure something out. Please post more soon as you can, please.

Will there be more?

Can't believe I missed this chapter. Great to see another one up and looking forward to anymore you care to post.

I'm not really fond of the turning-one-of-the-team-into-a-child type story, but this is brilliant. Well done for not making it too cute, and for maintaining the suspense and mystery throughout the story. It's a great read.

It's great. Really outrageus idea, and original at that. Don't give them an easy way out! I really look forward to seeing John Hart raisd ;)

So happy to see an addition! Love it, can't wait for more :)

YAYYYY DOCTOR! He'll know what to dooo. D I can't wait I'm do excited!

Just found this. Will there be more? John v. bully was great.

Mica safe and sound with an arm full or ice cream. I don't blame Jack for being mad with Ianto.

Great chapter! Seeing John's improvement and somewhat change in personality has always been interesting. ) can't wait to see what the team's reaction to the UNIT incident will be and vice versa.

You need to continue...you like, just have to. I love this story. I can't wait to find out what happens next!

I am just loving this story! I'm sorry you're having so much trouble writing it, though - it's wonderful! I think John Hart, ultra-sexy bad boy that he is, makes an adorable toddler. Yet he's still John, letting the good decent bit of his heart show through when he stood up to the bully and protected Mica. We always knew it was there, he just hates to let anyone see it. Same way it was in the car park at the beginning of KKBB - standing up for the little guy, albeit a tad savagely.

My fav part of all has got to be listening to Mica innocently repeat the gossip she's heard her Mam spouting about Carys and her child-rearing failures. To hear such language coming from the mouth of a little girl just sent me off into gales of laughter!

Well, I want you to know that I took a leap of faith, reading a story that wasn't complete; I've been burned so many times by this, so I'm trusting you to continue writing this story, to find a way to get John Hart back into his gorgeous body and cheekbones! Please don't let me down - don't betray the trust I've placed in you to finish telling the tale of the toddler called John Hart.

Absolutely awesome chapter! D I love it. :3

Wonderful and beautiful and touching and... yeah. I love Jack and Ianto together, and you do an amazing job of writing them.