I’m so SAD it’s so GOOD and it hasn’t been updated i ! ! !

Bill. xD

Ah you make such good fanfiction! All the ones I've read from you about Danny Phantom are epically good c:! 'Halfa Life' is just as good as 'The Suave and The Awkward'! I don't know which of them I like better.

I love the new twist on what it means to be a Halfa in this fic! It is ingenious! Also I like how you made it so either they both are closer to being Alive(Human and Half Human) and Dead (Ghost and Half-Ghost). The twin telepathy is pretty cool to and I just love the interactions between Danny and Phantom. The whole scene with them finishing each other sentences made me giggle a LOT. Also I laughed so hard when Danny brought up Phantom can't aim when he pees. I was laughing constantly for a solid 10 minutes XD

But yeah the child-like interactions between Phantom and Danny are really really good. I am confused thou as to why Phantom isn't transforming into his full ghost form, hell if Danny transformed wouldn't he heal faster? Also oh dear, I am kinda afraid of what Phantoms reaction would be once he finally figures out that when he gets hurt, Danny get hurt. I also like how they can feel when each other is around, Kinda like a piece of themselves that they didn't know was missing until they met each other.*cough kinda romantic but lets stick for fluffiness since this isn't a Pitch Pearl)

To bad this isn't Pitch Pearl. I could definitely see it turning into it easily if you wanted it to, and I wouldn't be disappointed if you did! But if you keep them as Brotherly I wouldn't be sad either. The Brother aspect does have a charm, and you have made it work so far :)!

Sam...Sam just gets on my nerves, being so forceful...er manipulative? Angry and Yelling for no really good reason... But I loved your interactions with Tucker, and I cannot wait until we progress enough to get him into the story.

So I hope you start this wonderful story back up and I hope you update it soon. It is such a shame that such a good story, that is done by an Author with such good grammar and writing style is left unfinished. But we all know how real life and motivation goes *shrugs*

I hope you like this review! I do it to make Authors smile about their stories and to be helpful or insightful, if you have any specific things you want me to review on about 'Halfa Life' just pm me and I'll try my best to help c:!

-Angelic Destiny Awaits-

This story is amazing! It has 23 chapters so far but Danny and Phantom are barely know eachthey haven’t called each other brother am I right?) I wish one day Phantom could finally accept by his parents, maybe after he saved the world (like the episode Phantom Planet) or some Maddie-Phantom mother and son bonding time, that’d be sweet! It just suggestions, so it’s all up to you! Keep up ur great work, and take your time. I am writing a Phanfic and I haven’t updated it for a while because school is constantly kicking my butt so it’s no need to hurry up.

Favorite chapter so far:)

Love this! I hope you can finish it someday :)

amazing so far

Please update soon!

continue plz! I want to see more

Phantom is just so adorable! XD

One: I really love this story. Unique take, well executed.
Two: I /hate/ mid-story author notes, and your story is filled with them. They don't do any favors r storytelling, it treats the reader like they are stupid, and it takes you out of the story very jarringly.

Please don't do this:

The ghost winced again. "Just peachy." He squinted his eyes as he looked up at her more closely. "Hey…I know you…You're…Danny's sister…uh, Jazz? I think so…if you'd…just hold still…" (AN-The ... is the only way I could think of to show how straind he was. They're little breaks where he, like, takes in two breaths or a long one.)

That is kind of obvious without the A/N, the reader isn't stupid. And when you but in to start talking about why you did a certain thing in the story... why? Can't you add it to your end authors note? This isn't a directors commentary movie, don't you want your readers to experience the story?

Anyway sorry for the rant, it's just pretty irritating.

Good luck and keep writing! :)

Ahh, I see I have finished this yet again.

I was browsing the site looking for something to read when I remembered a fic with a scene with Danny, Phantom, and Sam all together, probably the one from chapter twelve. Going through my account history, I re-found this story. I had favorited and followed it back on August 16th, 2011.

Now after finishing it a second time four and a half years later, I forgot it wasn't finished. Imagine my disappointment at finding that out two separate times. Now, I don't mean to guilt you into working on this again (okay, perhaps a little). I know an author's first story has a curious place in their heart: nostalgia, embarrassment, humble recognition, a small sense of pride, or any combination of the such. For you, it may now be just the basis of your writing career, but for the rest of the world it's a fanfic like any other, and I must say, you have something here. It takes a real compelling story to read 140,750 words of it (which is longer than some novels, including most first works by authors and my two favorite books), let alone read it twice.

Whether you want to continue it or not is really up to you. Life does unfortunately take precedence over fanfiction, even for most professional authors. However, this has dedication put into it and a fanbase because of that, so if you're not going to continue, some kind of ending is usually better than no ending. It makes it a complete story with a beginning, middle, and end, it lets people stop pestering you for updates, and it lets you fully move on to other projects you may have discovered since you started this...wow: almost seven years to the day. It may not be the ending you originally planned, but it's better than leaving it discontinued.

Whatever you choose to do, thanks for writing what you have! If you want an actual critical and constructive review, then you might as well update; your writing's most likely changed over time, so no sense in picking apart your writing from five years ago. n.n

I don't like stories with Danny dating others, not because I'm against gay people, I'm fine with them, I just ship Sam and Danny and try not to stray from that so I don't think there is anything wrong with this not being DF/DP

I've never heard of this type of AU before (and I'm glad I stumbled upon a non-ship fic of this-that would have been a weird first experience). The way you portrayed it was awesome! I just wish Phantom and Danny could talk it out, cuz really talking solves everything-for the most part. But, I guess if they did that, we wouldn't have this story :P
Reading your notes at the end of each chapter, you seemed so excited for this fic, sad to see that it couldn't be finished. C'est la vie. Oh well, it was a really nice fic to read and I thoroughly enjoyed it!

Phantom interacting with human things is just too funny.
(just started this fic, so far so good!)