That's a lot of angst for one story! But the fluffy-ish ending made up for it a little. I think I quite like Taitlyn as well, they go together like chalk and cheese but they do work when written well. And you do write them very well so :)

So much drama, I really did feel for Tess. Even though she did drive Caitlyn away. I like the uncertainty, the epiphany... makes Tess seem that much more real.

I saw the Maitlyn coming at the end only because you are a serial Maitlyn writer!

nope! i really didn't see that maitlyn being thrown in there! lol, that was good though. i loved this story. great job.

nice I like it

I loved it. I was happy when they got to see each other again.