update, i command u!

tadase thing does help -_-

Love it cant wait for the next one please write it soon! Can't wait

I love how camly she says that line LOL

I can't get past the first chapter. The characterization is horribly flat, the story is dialog heavy and you're using POV change despite the fact you don't know how it is supposed to be properly used.

Grammar. It is a wonderful, wonderful thing, and actual description is desired by most people too. Not only that, but this story is going so fast (with so little explanation) that it is making my head spin. The characters are barely recognizable for who they truly are, and I find myself just skimming the chapters in hoping to find actual point to this dribble.

Looking at your work like a critic would will give you major improvement in your work.

Ja ne!

Soul

finish it please ssooooooooon

Oh muh gosh RARR! *beats Leah to a pulp*

This is a really great story i absolutley love it

WOW. After whiteness I was sure the Cullens would have to turn Amu. I'm actually disapointed they didn't.

kol

I dont like that ikuto ended up with Leah he should be with Amu!

Can you pleeeease add some kutau or kukai?

AH...NOT AMUTO? Ah well. Real good!

Don't worry! I like it very much! And the person who gave you a bad comment, curse him/her!

One point... I'm actually a very big Amuto fan, but I think it's nice Leah found someone other than Sam. I like her too :)