Reviews for The Last Stop
Anonympen chapter 1 . 2/11/2017
urgh you should make the sequel! *kidding* I know it's been a long time since you write this story,but I must to tell you this story is so great!
Partsu chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
Even though you said this was perfect ENDING I believe that many agree with me but this is my opinion:

This should be continued until BO is gone and Shinichi and Ran married :D
Ocean Starfly chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Brilliant, I love it! You wrote this really well and the idea itself is pure genius! The whole thing being a dream... I don't even know what to say. There were a few parts that just sort of felt off - like when Shinichi confessed. I don't really know how to describe it other than just "off." Also, a couple typos: "awake" should be "aware" and "I'll explain, I explain" of course should be "I'll explain, I'll explain"

So what was your master plan? (Since its two years later, I assume you did it?)
A Midsummer Night's Dreams chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
What do you need Gosho-san's address for?
tanteigirl chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
this was great, really
Digeridoodler chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Awesome XD Such a creative story! It makes me feel a bit bittersweet though :/ Love ShinRan but Haibara is still my favorite character :c If she dies in the real story, I will cry like a baby.
little miss clueless chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
GOSHO AOYAMA IS ENDING THE SERIES! I want it to end for it's too long yet I don't want it to end coz Shinichi will be gone... huhuhu

Anyway... I really liked this fic!

Keep on writing!
s2lou chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
Oh my. Katie-chan, that is an amazing idea. *loves* Confusing and strange and interesting and you wrote it so well. I love it. *favourites*

... And I would be curious to hae Shinichi interact with either KID or Hattori from now on. xD That would make an interesting idea. (Seriously, Heiji's pretty much become Shinichi's best friend. Do you think he'd do without him?)

But I'm still in awe at the idea that the whole Conan thing might just be Shinichi's own form of purgatory. Give cookies to your brother, will ya? and some for you, too
nemo chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
... Now that's an interesting situation. Had to read it over a few times before I fully got it... But still, great writing. :D Good going, keep it up!
Rani07 chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
That was thoroughly enjoyable; I really liked your take on the ending for DC. :D I'd once thought about the series ending with the exposure of the organization, and like, a day later, Shinichi randomly waking up on his bed and realizing the whole ordeal was actually a dream. I wanted to hit myself with a mop Aoko-style just for thinking that. XD

But I liked YOUR version of it, connecting Shinichi's experiences to purgatory. That was so original! And Ai works wonderfully as a person who committed suicide and must make up for her actions; she's so wise and mature, she really could be a person who's experienced death. xD

Cookies to your brother! n_n

And yourself, for sharing such a great ficcie!
DireSphinx chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
Anybody reminded of Dallas?

(Sorry, had to make that reference. It was all a dream! A dream! Who the hell has that kind of dream?)

I'd be interested to know how Shinichi fields off knowing all these random facts about people, and knowing the names of people he shouldn't. What'll happen to Mouri without his Sleeping Detective Deduction Show? How else will he make himself look good to get Eri back?

And exactly how much time has passed? David says one hour on Earth for one year, and it was how long until Akemi was killed by the BO? So Ai should've committed suicide sometime after? Kinda confused on that issue.

But in regards to the story, it's a cool idea.

And that means Akai's still alive! Yea! (Just read his death in the manga - I know, I'm behind. But why him? He was cool!)

Liked it, loved it, want some more of it! Good job!
66ButterflyOfDarkness99 chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
M...The idea looks interesting, cute ending too ...but I think I would really and I mean REALLY kill Gosho if that happened at the end of DC...XD I mean, come on! All those cases and troubles and romantic and sad scenes and it was all part of his kind of purgatory! It didn't really happen? *shoots herself*

Gosho-sensei better give us that grand finale full of glory and romance 'cause if not...*dark aura in the background*