4 things

1: I like the implication doom won't be a major douche.

2: I like the Producers reference "if you've go it flaunt it."

3: I am a little creeped out by the Bobby/Veidt relationship but to each his own.

4: who's Harry supposed to be...Hellboy?...Hobgoblin?

I'm intrigued by where this is going, particularly with Victor and Magneto. And was Deadpool breaking the fourth wall there?

Kudos!

Rin.

Yay! More Jean and Byron! I like the twist on the Xavier Manson!

Kudos!

Rin.

Still going good!

You made me feel kind of unhappy with Dan. He was written well,I liked his characterization but it's not usual that someone can point out the bits I dislike in him. Harry's getting kind of emotional, huh? Keep it up!

Kudos!

Rin.

This is the anon from the kink!meme here.

Loving the bit in the asylum with Jean and Byron. I like the Harry/Peter/Kitty trio, and Bobby getting his powers in Antartica.

Yet again, a seamless crossover. As a writer of an epic crossover myself, I'm pleased to see a really good crossover, one that makes sense.

Kudos!

Rin.

Woah, I'm really impressed by this.

Bobby is rather lucky that he started freezing when he did. Otherwise he would have been deflowered by Ozzy. Looks like Rorschach wasn't totally wrong about Veidt.

You've managed to throw in one of my favorite heroes in here, Spiderman. For that alone you have my thanks. :)

Ta

Master of the Boot

PS: I hope there's room for wolverine.

About time you updated! Good job with the chapter, I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Hmm, I actually made my account JUST to review this. D

This is like a dream come true.

Im really looking forward to seeing this completed, because that would most likely be the best thing ive ever read. Hah.

And just a suggestion, what about a Silver Surfer appearance?

Or maybe even Iron Fist, Daredevil, or Doctor Strange?

Thatd be a twist. XD

The problem, of course, is that Veidt was actually sort of a good guy . . .

A lot going on; I can't wait to see where all the different roads lead to and where they cross.

Wow, I had forgotten just how big a cast you were working with in this fic. That's an intense amount of characters to juggle, but you're doing a great job! I can't wait to see what happens next (Harry, please don't maim poor Dan!).

Wow, you really are dealing with a large cast with this story! I feel that you've done a good job juggling so many people; you have your focus point with a couple main groups, but you also insert enough of the outer cast to show the wider plot arcs. I can't wait to see where this goes!

Still great,keep it up!

If only you knew how happy this fic makes me inside and how much I look forward to future chapters. Much love to you for this. I can't wait to see more. :)

Hm, an interesting set of characters so far, I'll be intrigued as to how this Reedless Doom will end up becoming, and Harry as the Hobgoblin looks to be pretty cool. Looking forwards to the next chapter. :)