I just discovered this since I've been trying to find books better than what the author wrote and after reading chapter 1, I wouldn't mind reading a rewrite of the other 3 books!

I am really glad I found your stories . Little darker but very good . Love your Cullens and actually don't mind Jacob and Billy here which is rare

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I actually enjoyed this. Thanks for writing it. You did very good and I really liked the way that you made Bella more realistic instead of so ... Forced. I mean, honestly when I read the Twilight series that's how Bella felt to me was like a forced character. She was bland, but everyone liked her. She stated how plain she was, but guys always flirted with her.
Then, of course, Edward and how beautiful, how amazing. I mean, voice wise Bella always sounded younger than she was. Mousey, strange, meh.

But this story was refreshing. Everyone seemed more real, focused, and a bit more believable. I liked it a lot.

poor writing

Flat chest? Isnt it sexual harrassment? Your version of edward is worse than the actual one.

this is by far the worst fanfiction i've ever read! why rewrite 3 books of a series you hate. i bet you secretly love twilight.

Also I like your Rosalie.

I actually like this Edward.

Hey, there. I was just thinking that instead of Edward being a jerk, he could be a shy character. It just came to me probably because of some of the shows I've watched.

So... I can already connect with this (much better written) Bella. I moved from Texas to Idaho, so I am right next to Washington and yes everything is green and there are actual seasons. Plus, I feel like this Bella is gonna have more character than in the Twilight books. I'll review every few chapters :)

damn, edward's a bitch. I mean, he already is, but...damn!

"I heal pretty face," said Edward...
Pretty sure that's fast.

"Not to mention you wreak of them," Victoria purred...
Reek, not wreak.

I could barely get through the fluff. I get you're just trying to make it better writing, but it's quite a redundant and pesky habit.