This was an excellent piece. I love the observatory point-of-view it's written from. The characterizations were very strong. :)

i liked ur story!

hey... are there some skin's characters?

hahaha

Like the previous person said, I can't believe this doesn't have more reviews. It's kind of bothers me actually, this was so well written. A very unique style of writing. I don't think I've read any other fanfic like this.

I got confused at times, but after a little thought, and re-reading of the last few lines, I think I understood what their whole 'situation' was leading to. So hoping I'm right: Mello was important and unimportant just the same and that MattxNear was simple MattxNear?

Anyway, just a thank you for your work. A fine read.

I honestly don't see why anyone hasn't reviewed yet; this story was written very well. And really, I couldn't tell that English wasn't your first language until you mentioned it, plus your grammar seemed mostly fine to me throughout the whole piece.

I love how you didn't use any direct dialogue, I think it adds to the detached feeling I get from the way you wrote it. I don't know if that's how you intended it, but I happen to like stories written that way, so kudos to you (intentional or not).

I also don't normally like Near paired up with anyone, (unless it's onesided), but I think you executed it very well and I think it sounds quite realistic.

"Someone should have at some point realized that if there’s a force to strike a genius down, it would be love. And to strike two geniuses down, it would be mutual love."

I loved that line there, and how you subtly made Mello the unofficial cause of it all, and this piece really just killed me with its awesomeness.