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Wait how could Roxas kill sora from inside his heart?

Hurt Sora... what do you mean by that?

Nice work. Yeah it's short; but it's nicely written. I like the part you picked out - I never thought of Roxas during Axel's death. I was busy cursing Sora :D

Yeah, I'm an Axel fan.

I didn't notice any grammar needed to be corrected. Good work! *Goes to favorites*

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