You are very fond of killing off the Pevensies in a train wreck. I don’t know why I don’t expect it by now, but it hurts me every time! I don’t know how you get me so invested in your stories in less than fifteen chapters, or how you always give me everything I wanted in an ending while simultaneously ripping my heart out. I DO know, however, that you are an AMAZING author who deserves to know about their true skill. All my love!

This was so beautiful, from start to finish!
Look forward to reading more of your work! 3

Such a good story yep I love it

This is AMAZING! Whoever wrote this, you are an incredibly talented writer! Keep writing!

I absolutely love how you started changing 'John' to 'Caspian' once he realized who he was.

:O

*cries* so sweet

Bravi, bravo! A totally amazing ending! I wasn't expecting Susan to be pregnant so it was a nuce surprise! And I live the added part abput the Southern Sun, referring to our dear Susan. Looking forward to rereading this!

AHAHHAHAAHHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SO BEAUTIFUL OH MY GOSH MY WHOLE BODY LITERALLY ACHES FROM THESE AMAZING susan and caspian FEELS

That was beautiful I'm glad you wrote it

I bawled my eyes out. Great job. Please write more soon! I love your stories!

( 0 . o ) who are you? And can I say that ur stories are... Amazing, inspiring, angst with comfort, the story leaves something of a relief and happiness and the end of your worries... But OmyGlob I can't stop rereading It. I'm not going to lie but it's beautiful... Still can't believe millions of people didnt review on this! Your story is damn good... Not like those Straight forward stories who just randomly writes something out of character and thinks its okay! I hope you make more of them for that u will review and support your stories! :33

GOOD JOB AND GOOD LUCK
JA'NE

Awesome story!

Wow!i have had this story in my favorites for a while but just realized i had never quite finished it, and i am so glad i came back to it! I really think your writing is amazing, and probably about the best i have seen on this site so stories deserve way more reviews and that any Suspian fans should read this. Beautiful job!

I read the whole story in one sitting.

I'm sad it's over. You did a marvalous job of creating

the perfect reunion between Caspian and Susan.

Thank you so much :)

I liked the ending paragraphs the most, with Rilian.

It captured the entirity of the story brilliantly.

Thank you for making my day.

FlyFlyxo