Reviews for Bella's Off Day |
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RoseCentury chapter 1 . 7/17/2018 Lol |
Ihatechoosinganame chapter 1 . 6/21/2018 haha loved it |
1llu510n chapter 1 . 6/25/2015 This killed me. I have been thinking about how Edward dealt with Bella's... 'humanity' a lot lately and I just love you for writing this up. And you even made sure they were in character. Great job! |
Leila chapter 1 . 4/19/2014 Hilarious...I haven't had one of those days yet..and I hope I never do. |
Chime chapter 1 . 6/12/2013 Wow all I have to say is LOL |
ImBartSimpsonwhothehellareyou chapter 1 . 1/1/2012 Hmm, I've always wondered what Edward thought when Bella did this kind of stuff. Very funny. |
TheOneWithStarsInHerEyes chapter 1 . 4/29/2011 lol! i don't like Bella much either and nobody ever brings up normal human flaws about her! not that i hate her, but i would hate to be edward in that situation... |
csp4 chapter 1 . 2/25/2011 Just had to read this:) Thank you, Thank you, Thank you! All this has gone thru my head many times! There can't be a human out there that never has these 'problems'. And with vampires having bionic noses, I'm surprised this has never been brought up in any of the FF stories I've read. Great shot! Well written! Thanks for sharing |
Beyond Birthday L Lamperouge chapter 1 . 7/28/2010 This was great, I kinda wish you could have done something about her period, I wonder how uncomfortable that makes Edward... hmmm... |
whosurdaddy chapter 1 . 5/26/2010 Oh wow that was so funny! |
aw3423rasedf23r4 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010 The summary made me really curious about this. I did never think about THIS side of Bella, though every human has to face this problems once in a while... Funny how nobody ever included something like that in a scene of their stories. Maybe because it's kinda gross, even though we all do it. Anyways, this was hilarious. I laughed my ass off while reading it. No real plot, no great love story, just Bella when she is having private moments or having something between her teeth. I can't believe how normal this all is, it sounds so strange when it's related to her (I mean, she's Twilight's heroine, she's perfect) but it makes her more human and even a little bit more lovable, I think. Great stuff! |
Blondii.623 chapter 1 . 3/20/2010 hi, funny as story really good loved it .Leechs |
unlovedAngel.x chapter 1 . 2/13/2010 I'm not a big Bella fan either, so I just plain loved this story! EMBARASS BELLA SOME MORE! I'll review! :D This is a very creative idea. |
WhiteRabbit-PatchouliChild chapter 1 . 2/4/2010 lol this is grawesome! ive always wanted to know how edward would react to this sort of stuff. i mean no one ever mentions it ur a really good writer:D |
Klutz4Eternity chapter 1 . 1/30/2010 haha so sort of gross, but you follow my story Eternal Solstice, so i felt obligated to check out yours. although this is gross, its still funny! |