...one can only wonder how exactly you can take away magazine from hands, yet that magazine was already put back in closed. I guess yet another power of Haruhi.

Or failtastic writer that forgot to remove all remnants of previous version of scene. Your choice.

(I will take aside that having this kind of thing out there is even less secure than hiding it in your own room)

Now this is an incredible fan fic! One of the best I've read concerning KyonxHaruhi! I love it!

Hello there. BlazeTrigger here. Well, to be honest, this is the first Haruhi Suzumiya fanfics that I've ever read believe it or not. And I must say, you certainly blew this story out of the park, as well as your others. I've read your first three in this series from start to finish and I'm impressed with the time you took to write this. It's very well done, despite the plot changes that were made. I felt like I was watching an episode. Now, I didn't notice any huge spelling or grammar errors while reading, so you're good on that, and you captured everyone's personalities well with this, including Kyon's first-person narrative in all the stories. I am hoping you will continue the fifth installment of the series, but if you don't, I understand. Overall, you did an amazing job with each story in the series and this first one was probably my favorite so far. Here's hoping for a continuation to your next Haruhi fanfic and I patiently await an update. Keep up the good work.

Until then,
BlazeTrigger21

Wow, this was amazing! You really got the writing style and the characters right, this is very believable as a novel! Although at first with the whole american sos brigade story I thought this wasn't going too well, it quickly proved me wrong. Maybe that's the only thing I disliked about it, but you impressed me! It was really cute too. Thank you, and keep writing!

Overall I found this quite an enjoyable story. Nicely done keeping everyone n character and having Haruhi actually argue with herself because her feelings are getting in the way of her goal, it irritates me when other fics just sort of gloss over that obvious issue. From a girl who literally claimed love was a mental disease, you'd think people wouldn't just drop that aspect of her entirely.

Something I'd like to note about this last chapter though is that Koizumi cannot possibly be correct, at least on the theories of Haruhi having dominion over the omniverse and splitting timelines/Schrodinger's Cat being able to coexist. If Haruhi controls the Omniverse, then a split timeline version of herself would mean the creation of either a parallel timeline within the universe she is currently in, or a new universe being created to hold that other timeline (depending on which theory you believe in; impossible to say from the source material since even with Disappearance in canon we don't know how a split timeline would work- that's more like plastering over a certain section of time with a different version). In either case, there would be another Haruhi with equal control over the Omniverse running around, and for EVERY choice each one ever makes a new timeline/universe is created, meaning an infinite number of them would be running around. This would mean that even if Kyon prevented her from destroying the Omniverse (as he did here), there would be another Haruhi who DID destroy the Omniverse, and since all timelines and parallel universes are contained WITHIN the Omniverse, it wouldn't matter what Kyon did since one version of Haruhi will have done it anyways. I'd say that perhaps Haruhi never destroys the Omniverse in either scenario, except that Schrodinger's Cat predict the existence of EVERY timeline possible being created when a choice is made. Even if Haruhi chose not to destroy the Omniverse in sextillions of the parallel timelines, because destroying it was a possibility at all the Omniverse would be gone regardless. Koizumi can be right on either Haruhi having dominion over the entire Omniverse (but there are no split timelines even if there are parallel universes), Schrodinger's Cat being real (but Haruhi has only dominion over the universe or timeline she is IN), or neither, but he can't be right about both.

I was going to go into a big dissertation on M Theory and the logistics inherent in that as well, but then I realized this is not meant to be taken THAT seriously and I should really take it less seriously. Then I realized that I basically did anyways, so uh... oops. ; Again though, great story! Gonna go read the sequels now.

Keep writing, and I'll keep reading. I love it, your awesome.

Read this a while ago; never got a chance to add it to my favorites; most certainly will do so now.

And there we go. Problem fixed. Good save!

Another error! Unless I'm extremely mistaken, Koizumi stated that all espers became aware of their powers the origin of said powers at the same time. In other words, 'K' would have know about who Haruhi was and that she gave them their powers the same day Itsuki and all of the others did.

It's hilarious, but the only thing that stands out about this chapter in my mind, is that Kyon said he never once believed in Santa. Aliens, Espers, Time Travelers and Sliders he wished for, but he never once even thought to believe in Santa.

I really shouldn't review before I read, but I just read the disclaimer. *sighs* I agree with it. *coughandimthirteencogh*

What can I say? This was entertaining and I always found myself really interested with the anime series. Not to mention the movie...

You have very little grammar errors, but, still this was massively entertaining and does live up to the humour that it's catagorized under.

10 outta' 10! Even though this is old now! lol

First off great story well thought out and well executed. only problem was names for example how you had Kyon refer to Haruhi as both "Haruhi" and "Suzumiya-san" which he did not do in the novel and everyone else Kyon refers to on a strictly last name (surname) basis such as Nagato and Koizumi. For all the other possible aspect that could have been screwed up the name think is minor, but i would like to see it in your next story and if its not well i wont hold it against you. Anyways really like your story and I would read it again/suggest it to a friend. 8.5/10

You have a job... and that job is to make this series the BEST! 11/10.

Very very good... BRAVO! You WON the INTERNET!