A great story. Very well written.

this is different but still awesome... keep up the good work

I love your Carlisle and Esme stories. Love, love, love them and I am so sorry that this is the first time I have reviewed on any of the three.

I think, with this one, my favorite bit was when Esme stopped breathing...just to spite everyone (herself included). It was one of those moments that SEEMS like it should be out of character...but because of the way you wrote it, it wasn't ooc at all.

Can't wait to read more from you. It's probably silly but this really did make my day :)

- Emily T.

I think this is going to be a lovely story. I'm very intrigued by the premise and I can see that you write Esme rather well. I love the humor as well, "Your people." It's expected of Esme to be a little confused as to how the pretense goes..

I do have a small suggestion to make. When you're having Esme transit from being 2 month oldto 6, and so on and so forth, perhaps you can add some sort of a divider? Because it's confusing when the paragraphs are all together like that.. I had to go back and read the previous paragraphs to make sure I'm getting the story right..

But yes, you're on a good start. :D Keep it up!

i totally loved this! i really hope you do some more esme/carlisle stuff, it's perfect! :D

I really liked this! I think it was written well, and I'd love it if you did more with this story ]

that was... perfect.

I love it ! it's very good ! aw

A strong story, but a bit disjointed. The POV from Esme didn't seem as strong as Carlisle's did in your last one. But still enjoyable, of course.

write more please. CAN'T WAIT. WANT TO KNOW MORE!