Reviews for Punishment Games Alternate Story
hikaruxkaoru chapter 1 . 5/6/2017
you are an amzinng write and i think you should wrtie more of this
Greengirl chapter 1 . 12/18/2016
THAT WAS AWSOME! I HAD A NOSEBLEED FROM READING THIS YOUR AWSOME
Nasaea Smith chapter 1 . 1/20/2016
Oh my god I love it! I'd rate it five stars because my favorite part was when Hikaru said "You know you can't win against me"That is the part I really enjoy and also I enjoy when he tricked job, when will you release more fanfiction of the hitachiin twins and thank you.
Death glare chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
A few misspelled words but other then that... I loved it so much it was awesome!
carsyn chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Nice story so far. a little graph but its great! can't wait for the next 3 stories!
cyberangle chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
grate story -

but i noticed with both of your punishment game stories, Hikaru seemed a bit forcefull o_o
Overly Sensitive Owl chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
tehe, I absolutely love Hikaru in this.

he is so cunning.

:D

this was a great story.
LycheePanda chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Awesome!
FreeBelovedArmy chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
E! This was awesome. Funny how Hikaru was still in charge, even though Kaoru was supposed to be his 'master'. Not that I care, I like this story and I wouldn't change anything about it, accept maybe showing what Hikaru does after Kaoru comes. XD
RockerGirl0709 chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
That was so awesome! I love HikaxKao lemons! You are truly amazing at them! Please write something like this again sometime! You're awesome at it!
Eye-Freak chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
Wow, thiswas quite interesting. Hikaru and Kaoru are my favorite characters. Sadistic and masochistic... Hot.

Right on my favorites.

Due with Respect

Eye-Freak
VanillaSlash chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Love it! o- "Kaoru, my sweet love..." - Perhaps the greatest line in the entire oneshot! 8o Kaoru is just so sweet and Hikaru is a total genius! :P
animelvr23 chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
awesome! ja ne!~ PLEASE~ UPDATE! ASAP~!
That Weasley chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
*.* Sugoi! I love it. It's so cute!

I demand more!

And if you ever need a beta, I'd me more than happy to help! Just send me an email.