Reviews for The Tempered Heart |
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Xud10a chapter 20 . 1/14 This story was good until the Mirror crap shit. I don’t think you understand how the Shinigami death seal works |
thegrison chapter 20 . 10/22/2019 Good until that mirror bull stink. Naruto seal is powered by the god world GOD OF DEATH. Meaning no little mirror could get around it or switch Naruto and 9 tails places. Killing the chairman was a huge mistake. I hope you learned from those errors and try again. The Snake added an extra seal on top of the 9 tails seal. So yea it did NOT mess with that one. |
Guest chapter 17 . 3/4/2019 your destined done - your destined one |
Guest chapter 17 . 3/4/2019 he would up - he would end up |
Guest chapter 16 . 3/4/2019 Of all the sense taste was - Of all the senses, taste was |
Guest chapter 15 . 3/4/2019 so long as can - so long as you can |
Guest chapter 15 . 3/4/2019 No," he replied - No," she replied |
Guest chapter 13 . 3/4/2019 black and yellow shake - black and yellow snake |
Guest chapter 13 . 3/4/2019 Taking the vile - Taking the vial |
Guest chapter 11 . 3/4/2019 not as food - not as good |
Guest chapter 10 . 3/4/2019 its permanent - its, permanent |
Guest chapter 7 . 3/4/2019 for awhile - for a while |
Guest chapter 5 . 3/4/2019 have dies out - have died out |
Guest chapter 5 . 3/4/2019 catching cold - catching a cold |
Guest chapter 3 . 3/4/2019 until her could - until he could |