Wowwwwwwee this was gorgeous!
Well done!

... BRILLIANT. I don't know what it is about your writing, but I can see it in my head, and it's exactly the sort of writing that I can believe. And hot, yes, can't forget that. :P

I am so reading more from you!

Nice story! Well written.

Beautiful, sad story. Amazing. A bit different from your usual stuff, but that is why I like it so much. It reminds me of Blue Velvet, one of my other favorite works by you.