The story is so cool, why can't you continue it?
Even if it some years ago you wrote this, hope you will write more like this in the future, if you decide to continue in the naruto fan base

Please continue this! It's really good. If you don't, I will personally murder you... D

The ending was hilarious, I nearly died!

Dun' starve.

awesome its great plz writ more its great!

yaoi

drools!

you hafta updateeeeeeeeeeeeee

write more

keep writing

write more please

loved it _

very well writen!

I knew that was Sasori. I had this feeling that person was someone fimilar and it wouldnt go away, and I find out it was Sasori and his sly self. Looks like you're in trouble Deidara. Didnt see that coming though.

Lady.

I love you. I don't even know how to properly describe how amazing this is.

I'll admit I've already read this like...5-6 times..I promise I can be patient and wait for more!

But, jeezus. I love it! You successfully kept my attention the whole way through(which is hard to do because I'm easily distracted)

So if you do decide to keep this going, it would make me a super happy lady, if not I would be sad, but it's all up to you.

I look forward to your updates.

3,

Brat

oh. meh. jashin. un. 0w0~

Oh, my! Only one chapter, and already you've managed to set a very engaging scene. There are a few hints as to what Deidara gets up to in his spare time, and as for his job...well, I think can guess. Heh heh.

I'm eager to read more, and let me assure you, this is the first fic I've found with such a premise...even if there are others with the same setting, this definitely feels very original and well-written.

I would absolutely love it if you continued this story, as I'm very eager to see the plot develop and learn more about Sasori and Deidara's respective situation. Think of this review as a sacrifice to the pagan god of Updates?...

Oh, um, you have one visible typo, where you wrote "hallow" instead of "hollow." The only reason I mention it is that it was the sole error I spotted...and not a very noticeable one at that.

Oh darling, you always know how to enthrall and excite me even at 8:04 in the morning as I munch on my breakfast re-reading the story to get me into the writing mood. It's what you do for me. Don't worry about the copy cats, just keep pumping it out if you decide to continue.

I've told you what I love about it, so I think a fancy review isn't needed for the moment.

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