I know you wrote this a long time ago, but I just found it. S**t, I almost ruined my keyboard crying!

Magnifique fiction, j'ai pleurer, c'est une très belle fic triste mais tellement bien écrite !
J'ai adorée mais si j'aurais aimée plus... bravo et merci !

Amazingly written. I sobbed.

I cried reading your story! IT was so SAD! no Tony! but anyway it was great!

-Charlie

Oh no- I don't want them to suffer!

You actually killed him! I thought that there would be a miracle, and Tony is saved...but no, he actually dies. Why you would you make me cry? I don't like you! JKJK...very well written, but I hope this NEVER happens too. :S

this story made me cry this is such a good story i really like tony

i couldnt imagine that ncis would be the same without him

I cried. It was soon a good story. Thanks

ohh man, I have tears streaming down the face. Poor tony, and poor, poor gibbs I was doing fine until Gibbs called a campfire and then I was bawling. Great, great story!

Wow...Oh my god that was so good yet so sad at the same time. My jaw dropped and I gasped so many times during this story. I felt so bad for Gibbs when he realized Tony was dead...That was so unbelievably sad. I like how it was Jimmy who got through to Gibbs finally and I especially liked the repeated line of "Jimmy Palmer of all people" For all his bumbling, I gotta say I like Palmer. And I loved how Gibbs ordered a campfire and I also loved at the very end where they're all doing something to remember Tony. I totally agree with you...if they ever kill off Tony, I'm gonna be heartbroken. I LOVE your writing...you have got to be one of the best writers I've ever seen. Believe me I get the whole school thing as I'm in my final year and my teachers are piling on the work, so definitely take your time cause school comes first but I can't wait until you update Blurred and I'm definitely hoping to hear more from you. :-)

-Andrea

What a sad and good story. I'm glad that each of them were sad that Tony died. I think that Gibbs should have built a boat and named it Tony, or DiNozzo.

Aw, that was heart-breaking. Loved the endings. You really know how to symbolize Tony, hehe. :D

I'm glad you decided to give your readers closure. It's always the worst when a writer creates a tragic story and ends it before the characters get to heal a little.

Very good.

that was SAD!

damn, how could you write something so sad, you have me in tears...snif sniff

but the end as extremely sweet, honestly!

O, well written, sad and moving, hope to see a few more chapters, thanks!