AAAAA I really looooveee this, naruto being so mysterious about his looks, being cute asf and being a badass guy thank god i found thissss... It's so cool

Whhhhhhhhhhhhy would you name you cat kiba?! Kiba like dogs not cats but other wise the story is awesome

this was very well done. you captured the humanity in a world of angels and demons. wonderful

So adorable!
That last line might be corny, but it had to be popular to become corny in the first place.
I really liked this story.
The last few scenes well we'll written and you did use the proper terms.

I am crazy in love with this story!

y does the animal room reminded me of five nights at Freddy's. heheh

At first I was ecstatic when someone tripped Naruto and he was such a bad-ass about it, I was afraid you would make him a pitiful victim instead of a fighter. Making Naruto a damsel in distress is quite insulting. But suddenly he is practically crying in front of everyone because of something like this, making his previous statement when introducing himself completely invalid. It seems as if you wanted to make him vulnerable while still strong, but it's coming off wrong, his character here is inconsistent. I would get if he would handle the situation with dignity and maybe then was sad when alone, but this... I hope you get what I'm trying to say, my English isn't the best... However, the plot seems interesting, even though very predictable so far. And I have to say, I especially loved the prolog

"Also notice my handsome, manly features." Guy kills me all the time XD

I loved it!
Can you plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz do a Sequel?

You should make a sequel of this story

Smexy yaoi brings me to tears...yaoi brings me to tears...;-;

Birthed is such a strange word... XD

GOD DAMNIT KAKASHI!

When kiba asked if they where going to be friends forever I couldn't help but think of the fox and the hound the best Disney movie ever. I freaking love this . so cute~

I love that song, it makes me so emotional whenever I hear it.