'I never should have said the things I said, even if they were true.' That's so back handed, any hot blooded male would have reacted to that, which you have written Edward to be, I dislike he didn't react.

That just reminds of the gender of the person writing this tbh.. I'm not saying that to be a asshole.. But a backhanded apology like that is almost always coming from a female who doesn't want to completely admit to a wrong.

I mean, if she can't handle the pressure, she shouldn't throw stones.

Hey, I just saw that your story was last updated in 2012 and I don't even know if you still check your reviews anymore, but I just wanted to tell you that I absolutely loved this story! I literally started and finished it today and there were so many cute moments that I was in love with. Sarcastic Bella is amazing and their banter just gives me life! Great job, thanks so much. Really, really enjoyed it.

Thank you for the Grease 2 references. That movie was a huge part of my childhood and I watched it all the time. I’ve always liked it better than the original version. The songs in that movie were classic and the acting was fantastic! OMG and who can forget the talent show at the end? It was epic!

Lol, yeah a feisty Bella. Just what I wanted. Now to see if she’s the cliched virgin. So hope not.

For someone who doesn’t want kids, he’s definitely going the wrong way about it. Ewwwwwww.
Sure hope this isn’t the usual virgin Bella comes along to teach him the error of his ways. Would love to see a feisty, experienced ball breaker bringing him down a peg or two.

Enjoying the story, but this Bella is utterly obnoxious. There is a very fine line between sarcasm and being just plain mean, and she crosses it on a regular basis. Sarcasm, to be effective, needs to be lightly done, so as to catch people off guard rather than a sarcastic comment being made every time her mouth is open.

Thanks for writing this story. To see how Edward and Bella found each other. To grow their relationship and see all the changes. What a ride.

This story was so well done, I loved how the relationship between Edward and Bella grew and also just all their shenanigans together. This was a lovely story thank you for writing it.

Nice story. But I really hate this Bella. She is so pretentious already prejudiced against Edward, but he really didn't do anything to her. There's a fine line between being a strong female character and being an entitled, bitchy woman and Bella definitely crosses it. So far, I can't see any redeeming qualities to understand why she's liked by everyone.

...She is so fucking annoying... I'm not reading that, I'm actually impress I stay until now. The characters are completely unlikable and I don't see how a romance could start from two morons who are acting like some children.

Yeah because with her bitchy attitude and obnoxious personality, Bella sure is the right person to criticize Edward. It's funny how many authors are incapable to see the difference between a strong female character with personality and an childish little girl who throw temper tantrums every chance she gets.

Are they playing at who can be the most immature and rude ? Because between mister I'm whining about "my" money and miss I'm ignoring you because you didn't ring the bell, it looks really like they are ten years old.

Enjoyed reading this story. Glad I found it. Thanks for sharing your story with us.

Sometimes I hated Bella's behavior and I didn't like when Edward yelled to his parents because they loved him. I liked the happy ending.
Thanks for your time
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LQUEZ