Utterly charming! The goblins were so darned cute, and the love story of Jareth and Sarah so romantic. A thoroughly heartwarming tale. Thank you.

That was awesome, really well done. So damn cute too.

I love this story! Couldn't stop until I read it all, it's so well written, original and although very sweet, it never gets cheesy. Great job!

I loved your goblins. They were like extra spice in the story. Thanks for sharing.

Oh my gawd, I cried! So funny! Such a great story, and the goblins were the best! Hahaha, oohhh, bravo! :3

Great story! one or two bits I didn't really buy, but Sarah having doubts because of her mom leaving is very realistic and you wrote Jareth very true to the charcter!

I love the part where Jareth thinks 'this is the most entertainment I've had in ages.'

Great Story! Love those goblins so funny!

i think my favourite characters in this were the goblins.. they were sooo funny! P

The goblins cracked me up in this. The emotions and plot were very well written from start to finish. I really do enjoy your style and the way you write everyone.

Good story

YOU know what . I wish you would do a sequel about SArah and Jareth having a first child and it maybe twins and how they drive jareth and the goblins to distraction with their antics. baby sitting goblins, especially Dink would make an hilarious fanfic.

this was excellent now where is the sequel . Haha. Don't think I can find one that is finished but I will look. The End of Days was Great, The Goblin Market, though it is not finished is superb, but, this it was heart felt, I loved it the most of all.

i certainly hope you have written more than this one fanfic bec I like your style of writing. You should read Fallen Star by alydia Rackham it is a Loki/jane fanfic but the best of the best I have found on he fan fic sites and that was all by mistake. I did not intend to start reading this stuff again and looking for anything under a 700 hits bec that means they have been read by at least three times the people that did not review. I am picky about what I read. So far this is one of the very best I have read and one of the most well written. You probably don't review this anymore so why am I writing. Remember Fallen Star alydia Rackham Loki/jane fanfic

good, I love when the Goblins have names and personalities. This is a different approach though i suspect that you like Lexxie's fics as do I. I loved My Fine Feathered Friend and I found this one that looking interesting on her list. Wish she would write again. She is talented. So are you, very, very talented. It is such an easy read it just moves you along and that is hard for any writer. I was surprised you made Sarah 37, that is older than, most make her about 24. I am glad that she is older, wiser, experienced with life, but still a little innocent. She would also look closer to the Goblin King's age, since Bowie was well into his 40's I think when movie was made. YOu know they wrote REturn to the Labyrinth but after reading what it is about I decided I'd just stick to fanfic and save 20 dollars for all four on ebay or amazon will finish tonight and then review. It is already one in morning, snowing, sleeting, so i guess no one is going anywhere tomorrow and we can stay home and read. This is Alabama, USA we are not supposed to have so much darn SNOW